DesignsBear

Everywhere but Nowhere

Wife and mother of two boys. I have a love for all things werewolf and vampire. I also love interracial love stories. Please check out my books. COMMENT, FOLLOW AND REVIEW!!! Thanks!

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Awesome Story!

I loved the plot of the story. I found myself being happy for the racist which was crazy.. But this book showed how you shouldn't judge people by the color of their skin. Awesome, Awesome read.

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Ready to see what happens next.

Revenge Diaries has a great plot. What I really like about the story although it is a work in progress is it keeps you wanting to know what happens next especially to the killer. Another aspect that I like is that the author incorporates aspects of a different culture that I'm not accustomed to and I haven't seen in other books. I can't wait to see how the story ends.

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Work in Progress

Overall the initial chapters of the story are alright. The first chapter was very descriptive and draws you in. That chapter I really liked, but the plot gets lost in the following chapters and I started to lose interest after the beginning of the second chapter. Maybe the story will pick up with later chapters.

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I am hooked!

This story is off to a great start. With the plot there is so many ways the author can take this story. It seems that all the characters have some type of secret concerning the death of the main characters mother and that keeps pulling you in to find out what happens next. It makes you want to know who killed her and why are they keeping everything from the daughter.

I can't wait to see which direction the author takes the story.

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Good Start

Although A Scrunchie and Some Red Lipstick is a work in progress I think it has a good start. Although I don't quite understand the title which I'm sure the book will reveal later the plot to the story is interesting. The author's writing style is good as well as the author's technical writing skills. I look forward to learning what happens to the main character and how she deal with the abuse. Overall good start!

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