DesignsBear

Published Author with ZachEvans Creative, wife, mother of two. I love interracial romance stories and paranormal. www.courtneydean.com

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Great Short Story

Great job! Love how the character grew from her inner thoughts to express them into that speech at the end. Excellent job. Mina the only thing I would suggest is to separate the speaking parts of each individual speaking. It will allow the story to flow easier. Other than that it was an excellent short story with a great story line and character development. Keep up the good work!

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Awesome Story!

I loved the plot of the story. I found myself being happy for the racist which was crazy.. But this book showed how you shouldn't judge people by the color of their skin. Awesome, Awesome read.

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Ready to see what happens next.

Revenge Diaries has a great plot. What I really like about the story although it is a work in progress is it keeps you wanting to know what happens next especially to the killer. Another aspect that I like is that the author incorporates aspects of a different culture that I'm not accustomed to and I haven't seen in other books. I can't wait to see how the story ends.

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Work in Progress

Overall the initial chapters of the story are alright. The first chapter was very descriptive and draws you in. That chapter I really liked, but the plot gets lost in the following chapters and I started to lose interest after the beginning of the second chapter. Maybe the story will pick up with later chapters.

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Good Start

Although A Scrunchie and Some Red Lipstick is a work in progress I think it has a good start. Although I don't quite understand the title which I'm sure the book will reveal later the plot to the story is interesting. The author's writing style is good as well as the author's technical writing skills. I look forward to learning what happens to the main character and how she deal with the abuse. Overall good start!

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