Craig-James

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Well then...

Okay so Haunting Dawn is the prime example of a good idea but poor execution but please to remember that this is nothing more than constructive criticism to help you.

The plot you had in mind was good but you handled it rather poorly. Putting grammatical errors aside which made my reading experience quite hard at times the book in its entirety felt completely rushed. Your writing style could use work because I felt nothing while reading this, it was like floating a long a river and the only thrill of the experience was being in the river. To supporting elements that was supposed to elevate the plot and characters to a good or even great level were almost non existent.

I don't know you personally but from your writing I can tell that you're young and with time and experience you'll get better so I wish you the best of luck on this journey. ✌ I hope this doesn't deter you from this passion because remember that even the greatest of novels have audiences who didn't enjoy it like the masses.

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Worth the read.

I was extremely hesitant to try with how cliche werewolf stories tend to be in my eyes so it was surprising that it wasn't. From a readers point of view I enjoyed how the chapters kept moving the plot forward without it feeling like an boring exposition dump. The characters weren't bland and I really enjoyed how different this plot was compared to most other werewolf books I've tried.

You just might have reignited my interest to the genre. 👏

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