Crescent

romeo and juliet

i really liked the core concept of the novel. taking the tragic tale of romeo and juliet and making your own version is incredible! especially, the world building has great potential.

as i was reading, i struggled to understand what was going on. most of your sentences were confusing and sometimes over complicated. i think a bit of simple exposition could help.

the social misfit

i definitely didn’t expect for Rebecca’s mom to have died at the beginning. very sad but a very intriguing opening! i’m not so sure what the overall plot is just from the first chapter but Rebecca is a good character, so it doesn’t really matter. some of your sentences sounded a bit off and sometimes childish due to your word choice but overall it was great! keep on writing!!

review

The word choice for this poem is stellar! Overall an amazing read. On a first read, certain descriptions confused me a bit due to the flowery language, but this is still a joy!