Crystal Ferrer

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Creative and Original, but a bit too quick

The plot itself is really creative and original. It's definitely worth to keep going with, but its a bit too quick. Things happen too fast for the reader to really understand what's happening or for them to connect to the characters. My suggestion is to add more detail in each event, and maybe even adding some filler in between events that helps us learn more about the character and their reaction to the events.
Hopefully this series will continue and only get better from here, showing its potential. I look forward to it!

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