Cyndy Sarrazin

Fort Saint John, British Columbia

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Short, sweet and fun to read. I like the idea behind it. That is what caught my attention; the idea behind it. It is a little rough in the writing but I could see it become amazing with a little bit more details. I do like it though, it just feels like a first draft. I believe that good stories really do need about 3 re-writings, or awesome beta readers.

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