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cynthia8358
22đłď¸âđ Fictional characters is where my heart liesđ Favorite novels so far: Master of the Game by Sidney Sheldon. Red, white and royal blue by Casey Mcquiston đ¤
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This is definitely my opinion and Iâm here because I feel like I should point it out. I love where youâre going with your story but itâs so summarized. Take your time to explain what has happened in the club. Youâre rushing and itâs a turn-off. Good story thoughđ
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So um, I read the first chapter of your book. Judging from the summary, you do know where your going with your story which is pretty great.đ My only problem is you need to work out on your description. Help us writers create a perfect imagination. Thatâs what we are here for. To feel everything you write, hear, smell. Donât just summarize your work. Describe all characters, take time to tell us how Nessyâs parents look like... Kerrieâs house, Nessy herself and so many others. Your punctuations are quite great. I love the spacing. Quite flattered. Donât give up đ
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