D. C. Havez

Wow!

It honestly felt like I read an entire book in one chapter.

The character development was very quick and descriptive. I really enjoyed the unique take on vampires that seemed to be added. Overall, I loved the story and really hope the author decides to turn it into a novella.

Great job!

Very Descriptive

The story started out a little slow but then it went from 0-100 SO QUICK!

Very detailed and enjoyable. The author painted a very clear picture, it literally felt like I was watching a movie.

There were a few minor spelling and punctuation errors here or there, but overall I really enjoyed the read.

Looking forward to future updates, keep up the good work!

Amazing!

It felt like I was experiencing the story as I read it!

The detail was incredible! Loved the style of writing. While everything that happened was totally insane, it felt real. Almost believable!

Either way, I'm sleeping with the lights ON tonight, that's for sure.

10/10 would recommend. Great story!

Interesting Read

The story caught my attention right away. The writing style was very modern and really felt as though the narrator's voice was loud and clear in the mind of the reader.

There were a few grammatical errors and the plot was a bit difficult to follow at times, but the overall premise of the story was very eye catching and interesting. I would really like to see a bit more detail added to the scenes if possible. With a bit of editing and attention to detail, I feel as though this book would be worth 5 stars and I would be more than willing to continue reading it in the future!

Loved the idea and very happy that I took the time to read it. It was very good for a first time writer.

Emotional Roller Coaster

This story had me on the edge of my seat at the very beginning. The characters were brilliant and the amount of detail was enough to make me feel as though I was there.

Although there were a few minor inconsistencies and grammatical mistakes, the story was very raw and exciting and I loved it. 10/10 recommend to anyone!

This story was amazing!

Little Ruby Red might just be the absolute best story I've read on Inkitt and I am so glad that I had the privilege of coming across it. The storyline was exhilarating and the plot twists were enough to make me scream OUT LOUD! I instantly fell in love with the characters and the writing style was out of this world. The punctuation, the grammar, the vocabulary, the humor! AND the detail of this book was to. Die. For. Absolutely BRILLIANT! The only issue I found in this story was completely superficial and hardly matters at all. As an American, it was easy to tell that the writer may be from the U.K due to some of the word use here and there but the book was still fantastic. It is an absolute crime that it isn't published.