Damian

A gaudy apartment with Lucien Castle

Professional procrastinator. Loves critique, and is shady af. The popular guy, everyone mostly hates. Alexander & Hephaestion and Achilles & Patroclus are my forever OTPs. #blacklivesmatter

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The devil's ghost henchman

Lucifer, did I hear? Jesus, I love any story about Lucifer (no pun intended). Furthermore, the plot os really good and I love the story so far. Worth the read.

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Good

Unlike my MC, your MC seems quite nice, Krush. This story has a good plot, and has potential in it. Make the chapters shorter, and keep cliffhangers. Those keep the reader on their toes. Good Luck!

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This book

The plot of the book is good, enthralling and different from others whjch I've read. But, pay attention to expressing emotions better. Look out for the grammer mistakes, and keep up the good work.

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Good

This story is different from the others. The writing style is good, and the teaser was pretty catchy. Look out for the punctuations a bit, and you're all set! Good luck!

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The nightmare

This story was good, but hard for me to read. The punctuations weren’t put properly, the grammer needs more work. The plot is engaging.

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I absolutely love this book. It's different, but enthralling. The plot is detailed and well described. Emotions are perfectly expressed. Can't wait to read more❤️

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Actually, I don't know what to say. This book left me awestruck. The writing, the emotions, the plot...girls, you're amazing!!!

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I take it, you love fantasy. I do too, all of us do. A great story, I'd like to read more.

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As a critic, Grammer needs to improve, but good thing is, story plot is good. Has me reading. You've scopes to improve, but you're doing great!

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Good

I really love this novel. Brandon's character is so dark and damaged. I have newly created my account and I hope you would check out my story "The Metallic Love" and thank you.

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Review

Synopsis is good. The story line has potential. Emotions and situations are explained very thoroughly, which is good. I like this one.

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Trapped

First thing first, the book cover is nice. Then, I'd like to point out how you're supposed to start every line with a capital letter. Merge your paragraphs together; right now, they make no sense. But, story line is good. Best of luck, kid!

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I am Kaspar

I've only read the first chapter due to being work overloaded at the moment, but, I regret not reading this before. I love your style, the way you describe the scenarios. You've great potential, Alicia. Keep moving!

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Poetry

I like this poem. Feelings and emotions are nicely expressed. Did a good job ;)

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Family House

The plot's arrangement is quite good, honey, but you need to pay attention to the punctuations and the spellings. Rest all if fine. Good Luck!

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Underneath

Intriguing title, though not my type of book. A nice one, though. Keep writing, make the chapters a bit longer.

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This book

The story is well written and the plot is good. Keep writing!

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Children of the Plague

The title itself is quite intriguing and interesting. I'd say that this story is good. But, you need to work on describing the emotions a bit, to give this story the peefect ending stroke. Loved it❤

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Submission

Well, I didn’t see any character development in this story. What about the protagonist? About her life? Her ambitions? And her love interest? Tell something about that man. Describe him. Grow and develop the characters. As a dominant myself, I chose to read this book. And only we know that it's always the submissives who hold the real power.

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Nightmare

The title suits the type of story you're going for. It's subtle, yet dark. A kind which I prefer reading. You have talent, love. Keep writing.

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The Cursed Boy

I've read the first few chapters and can I just say how different and capturing this book is? It has really caught my attention. I'll read the whole stuff. Great work, author! Kudos❤

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The plot is great. Grammer needs a bit improving, but that's all. I liked it.

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What my grandmother taught me

This story is going good so far. Maybe, try making the chapters a bit longer? That would really do the trick. Good luck!

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This book

The plot is different. Good kind of different. But, grammer needs a bit improving, and so does the punctuations. Except that, it's really worth a read.

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In sickness and in health

Honestly, I came to read this story only because I was promised a review swap in return. But this, this is amazing. The plot is so very different and it got me hooked. I read your first book "Writer's sword' too, and that really helped me with my writing. You are brilliant. Kudos!

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Songs

I actually liked the songs. You should write more!

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BENEATH THE WINDOW

Horror. I actually love reading horror and the blurb was interesting. The cover of the story is nice and the plot is well written. I like it.

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Dangerous love

Dark, sexual romance stories are absolutely my type. This book is good. Improve the grammer a bit. Describe the emotions a bit more, and you're there, dear author!

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Help me find me

The plot had me enthralled, and I really like this story so far. It's almost flawless and I love it. Looking forward to reading more of this.

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THIS BOOK

I love historical fantasy and I really like this book. Shorten the length of the chapter a bit for lasting attention span, and try to leave more cliffhangers! There you are, amazing!

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HELLBOUND

Okay, the title of the book has me intrigued. The plot line is good, suspenseful and is a page turner. I have read only three chapters yet, but I'm gonna read it all. The author knows where the story is going. So, I like it.

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SHORT STORIES

I love this book. Correct some punctuations and grammer errors, and there you are, perfect. I love this book. Keep updating.

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UPDATE!

The blurb was so catching and the plot is amazing. I read the book, and I love the characters. Please, update soon!

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HEIR OF THE MOON

Well, first of all, I love the title of your book. Probably, you could improve your grammer a bit. The story line is good, filled with fantasy, is kind of scary. You express emotions nicely, which is a plus point. I look forward to read more.

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Actually, I like this book. Work on the grammer a bit, and everything else is amazing.

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I've read the first few chapters of this book so far, and I'm liking it. I love how you built the characters, how you express the emotions. You need to improve in grammer a bit, other than that, it's really good.

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I loved the title of the book, and, the book is uniaue, different. I really enjoyed it this far. I hope you're going to keep up the good work, love. All the best.

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EXPERIENCE ME

Well, I love the name Silas, truly. And, the book is quite nicely written, though, I'd like you to keep some small things in mind, like using of capital letter just after a full stop, and some grammatical mistakes are also present. Do edit it when the book is done. But anyways, I loved the book.

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First of all, I like a good mystery book, and to my pleasure, this is one. I like the pace of the book, and the writing style you use. All the best!

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BORN

First of all, I love the title of the story, then the cover is beautiful. The teaser is accommodating, fulfilling. The plot is going on with a steady pace, I'm loving your writing style. Kudos!

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My review

Being homeless is hard, and you have portrayed it beautifully. Plot is unique, and I'm a sucker for gay romance as I myself write many of those. You could use a bit more sophisticated words, but emotions are expressed perfectly. Can't wait to read more!

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Man, you can't keep us hanging with this. This book is simply brilliant! Where are the updates? I fucking love it

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I don't know why this story is rated so less. It's actually amazing!

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I would generally say it's a very nice story. But, constructive criticism is my thing, so here I go. You give WAY too much detailings, which are sometimes unnecessary and emphasize things much more than they should be. Try to make the chapters a bit small, because that long a chapter, bores a reader. Other than those, I love your writing style. Keep going!

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Review :

This story is actually very detailed and is extremely intriguing. Absolutely perfect. Keep going!

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Story

A very good start. Definitely interested. Can't wait to read more

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Zoi

I'd like to say, that I love poetry and this did catch my attention. It's absolutely worth the time. I loved all the poems 💕

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Broken Family

Good start. Grammar needs to improve, so does writing style. Keep going.

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REVOLUTION

You're doing a great job, so far. Keep up the good work. Will be waiting for more

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This book

I believe, this book is off to a great start. And you, dear author, are amazing at writing. This book has me hooked, and I absolutely freaking love it. You have my full support❤

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I don't think that you know we have to use a word starting with a capital letter after we end a line with fullstop. That's very silly. The writing style is bleak, and hasn't gotten me hooked. Try improving. Try giving things some details. Emotions are not expressed properly. Good day.

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