Damian

A gaudy apartment with Lucien Castle

Professional procrastinator. Loves critique, and is shady af. The popular guy, everyone mostly hates. Alexander & Hephaestion and Achilles & Patroclus are my forever OTPs.

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I absolutely love this book. It's different, but enthralling. The plot is detailed and well described. Emotions are perfectly expressed. Can't wait to read more❤️

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I would've preferred the title, "And then I met you", but this is actually good. I like the story. Nice written, the emotions are well expressed. I love the way you go into the details. Grammer has some scope of improvement. But overall, it's excellent.

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Actually, I don't know what to say. This book left me awestruck. The writing, the emotions, the plot...girls, you're amazing!!!

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I take it, you love fantasy. I do too, all of us do. A great story, I'd like to read more.

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As a critic, Grammer needs to improve, but good thing is, story plot is good. Has me reading. You've scopes to improve, but you're doing great!

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Good

I really love this novel. Brandon's character is so dark and damaged. I have newly created my account and I hope you would check out my story "The Metallic Love" and thank you.

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The plot is great. Grammer needs a bit improving, but that's all. I liked it.

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This book

What can I even say? I'm a sucker for Greek mythology as my bio screams already. This book is perfect and the way you described Hades is flawless. I relate with Hades very much, and this book is a delight to read. Don't stop writing❤️

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What my grandmother taught me

This story is going good so far. Maybe, try making the chapters a bit longer? That would really do the trick. Good luck!

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This book

The plot is different. Good kind of different. But, grammer needs a bit improving, and so does the punctuations. Except that, it's really worth a read.

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This book

This book is very interesting, though not a genre I generally go for. The plot is nicely planned and the writing style is amazing. Great job!

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In sickness and in health

Honestly, I came to read this story only because I was promised a review swap in return. But this, this is amazing. The plot is so very different and it got me hooked. I read your first book "Writer's sword' too, and that really helped me with my writing. You are brilliant. Kudos!

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Songs

I actually liked the songs. You should write more!

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BENEATH THE WINDOW

Horror. I actually love reading horror and the blurb was interesting. The cover of the story is nice and the plot is well written. I like it.

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Dangerous love

Dark, sexual romance stories are absolutely my type. This book is good. Improve the grammer a bit. Describe the emotions a bit more, and you're there, dear author!

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Breathing

The cover is unique and eye catching and so is the plot of this story. It's mysterious, suspenseful and I hope this doesn't end like other cliche stories. So far, so good!

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Help me find me

The plot had me enthralled, and I really like this story so far. It's almost flawless and I love it. Looking forward to reading more of this.

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THIS BOOK

I love historical fantasy and I really like this book. Shorten the length of the chapter a bit for lasting attention span, and try to leave more cliffhangers! There you are, amazing!

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HELLBOUND

Okay, the title of the book has me intrigued. The plot line is good, suspenseful and is a page turner. I have read only three chapters yet, but I'm gonna read it all. The author knows where the story is going. So, I like it.

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SHORT STORIES

I love this book. Correct some punctuations and grammer errors, and there you are, perfect. I love this book. Keep updating.

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UPDATE!

The blurb was so catching and the plot is amazing. I read the book, and I love the characters. Please, update soon!

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HEIR OF THE MOON

Well, first of all, I love the title of your book. Probably, you could improve your grammer a bit. The story line is good, filled with fantasy, is kind of scary. You express emotions nicely, which is a plus point. I look forward to read more.

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Actually, I like this book. Work on the grammer a bit, and everything else is amazing.

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I've read the first few chapters of this book so far, and I'm liking it. I love how you built the characters, how you express the emotions. You need to improve in grammer a bit, other than that, it's really good.

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I loved the title of the book, and, the book is uniaue, different. I really enjoyed it this far. I hope you're going to keep up the good work, love. All the best.

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EXPERIENCE ME

Well, I love the name Silas, truly. And, the book is quite nicely written, though, I'd like you to keep some small things in mind, like using of capital letter just after a full stop, and some grammatical mistakes are also present. Do edit it when the book is done. But anyways, I loved the book.

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BORN

First of all, I love the title of the story, then the cover is beautiful. The teaser is accommodating, fulfilling. The plot is going on with a steady pace, I'm loving your writing style. Kudos!

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I really love this book. The plot is unique, detailed and I fucking love it! I also dropped a like. It's amazing❤

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Being homeless is hard, and you have portrayed it beautifully. Plot is unique, and I'm a sucker for gay romance as I myself write many of those. You could use a bit more sophisticated words, but emotions are expressed perfectly. Can't wait to read more!

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Man, you can't keep us hanging with this. This book is simply brilliant! Where are the updates? I fucking love it

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I don't know why this story is rated so less. It's actually amazing!

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I don't really read romance stories, bit this is rather cute with an amazing plot. Buddy, keep going!

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I would generally say it's a very nice story. But, constructive criticism is my thing, so here I go. You give WAY too much detailings, which are sometimes unnecessary and emphasize things much more than they should be. Try to make the chapters a bit small, because that long a chapter, bores a reader. Other than those, I love your writing style. Keep going!

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This story is actually very detailed and is extremely intriguing. Absolutely perfect. Keep going!

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Black Hole

I really happen to like this book. Grammer, and writing style, plot etc. This is heavily underrated. I'll be waiting for more!

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Story

A very good start. Definitely interested. Can't wait to read more

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Zoi

I'd like to say, that I love poetry and this did catch my attention. It's absolutely worth the time. I loved all the poems 💕

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Broken Family

Good start. Grammar needs to improve, so does writing style. Keep going.

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REVOLUTION

You're doing a great job, so far. Keep up the good work. Will be waiting for more

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This book

I believe, this book is off to a great start. And you, dear author, are amazing at writing. This book has me hooked, and I absolutely freaking love it. You have my full support❤

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I don't think that you know we have to use a word starting with a capital letter after we end a line with fullstop. That's very silly. The writing style is bleak, and hasn't gotten me hooked. Try improving. Try giving things some details. Emotions are not expressed properly. Good day.

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