Damian 🇩🇪

Review

As the previous review said, I'll say you use the word 'as' a lot. That's something I used to do when I was a newbie writer, and ir made the whole sentence sound kinda abnormal. And the plot is just fine, though I'd suggest you to use cliffhangers at the end of every chapter to keep the readers hooked. And, look into the grammar a bit, sweetheart. There are some mistakes. Hope you'll keep reading my story, and I'll be reading yours, love.

Satisfying

Honey, your book needs polish. Where's the character development? It seems like an age old rushed down cliched romance. Where is the part where the complexity of the characters come in? Make some parts toxic, the others anti-toxic. Fix your grammer and punctuations. That's all.

Black Moon Luna

Werewolf genre is something I avoid at all costs, but seems like I struck gold with this one. The story has varities of topics including romance, like political stuff, aliances, power. It allures someone to dive right in the book. Kudos, keep writing!

The devil's ghost henchman

Lucifer, did I hear? Jesus, I love any story about Lucifer (no pun intended). Furthermore, the plot os really good and I love the story so far. Worth the read.

Good

Unlike my MC, your MC seems quite nice, Krush. This story has a good plot, and has potential in it. Make the chapters shorter, and keep cliffhangers. Those keep the reader on their toes. Good Luck!

This book

The plot of the book is good, enthralling and different from others whjch I've read. But, pay attention to expressing emotions better. Look out for the grammer mistakes, and keep up the good work.

Good

This story is different from the others. The writing style is good, and the teaser was pretty catchy. Look out for the punctuations a bit, and you're all set! Good luck!

The nightmare

This story was good, but hard for me to read. The punctuations weren’t put properly, the grammer needs more work. The plot is engaging.

REVIEW

I absolutely love this book. It's different, but enthralling. The plot is detailed and well described. Emotions are perfectly expressed. Can't wait to read more❤️

Songs

I actually liked the songs. You should write more!

THIS BOOK

I love historical fantasy and I really like this book. Shorten the length of the chapter a bit for lasting attention span, and try to leave more cliffhangers! There you are, amazing!

REVIEW

Actually, I don't know what to say. This book left me awestruck. The writing, the emotions, the plot...girls, you're amazing!!!

REVIEW

I take it, you love fantasy. I do too, all of us do. A great story, I'd like to read more.

REVIEW

As a critic, Grammer needs to improve, but good thing is, story plot is good. Has me reading. You've scopes to improve, but you're doing great!

Good

I really love this novel. Brandon's character is so dark and damaged. I have newly created my account and I hope you would check out my story "The Metallic Love" and thank you.

Review

As the previous person said, it's too early to judge, but I'd like to say that the story had a lot of potential. Reggie's character is surely well written, but you could use a few more descriptions and expressions. The punctuations could improve. Keep it up.

On the verge

Oh crime and romance, just the perfect thing. I love the way your book is written. The plot is engaging, and I find depth in it. It's really good, and has got a lot of potential. Keep it up.

Review

It's really mind blowing. I don’t give out positive reviews like that, but by the way you started this with a quote really moved me. Your writing is fantastic, and I'm an admirer, I have to admit. Excellent work!

WOW

I mean, it's really good. The way you write is simply graceful. It flows easily, you know where to use your words and such. It's poetic, it's touching. There isn’t much you can improve with what you already have, but I would suggest you to give this book one final edit after the book is over :)

Review

Really not into straight stories, but this is a good one. Nicely written, very well described. Check the punctuations a bit and you're all set. Great job.

AMAZING!

The descriptions, the style of your writing, makes icy horror grab the reader's heart. It's all so vivid and fucked up. I loved it!

Rekindled

The story plot is good and the writing engages the reader to keep reading. But one thing, look after the indentation of the paragraphs and the grammar. Other than that, it's amazing.

Review

The story plot is good and the writting engages the reader to keep reading. But one thing, look after the indentation of the paragraphs and the grammar. Other than that, it's amazing! The story plot is cliched, but if one is into loveable romantic stories, this book is the one for them.

Review

The story plot is good and the writting engages the reader to keep reading. But one thing, look after the indentation of the paragraphs and the grammar. Other than that, it's amazing!

Once bytten

The story plot is good and the writting engages the reader to keep reading. But one thing, look after the indentation of the paragraphs and the grammar. Other than that, it's amazing!

Dream Boy

I certainly don't know about you, but the ‘DEDICATION’ written on the very first page of the book written about how people should cherish the person who loves them back, ran shivers down my spine. It was made up of a few words, but it was

I N T E N S E. I loved it.

The Assassin's Beast

Werewolf stories are absolutely not my thing. But the amazing fact is, your story is intriguing. It's unique and keeps me hooked to it. The writing style is smooth, but I'd suggest you to indulge a bit more into the detailings. Plus, the cover is amazing. Keep writing, love.

Long Gone

Truth be said, this is not the regular genre of story which I'd prefer reading. You need to pay attention to the punctuations and your grammer. The plot can thicken in the future, so I'd tell you to ease and flow with it. It has potential. Keep writing.

HAD ME STUNNED!

I've never given that much of a high rating for any book till date, but oh boy, it's klaroline. The dialogues — your writing style — the plot, had me aching for more until I read the full book. Your portrayal of Klaus Mikaelson is the same sadistic, psycho Klaus I loved in TVD. My best OTP till date, and you did such an amazing job with it. Stan ya, mate ;)

Review

Synopsis is good. The story line has potential. Emotions and situations are explained very thoroughly, which is good. I like this one.

Trapped

First thing first, the book cover is nice. Then, I'd like to point out how you're supposed to start every line with a capital letter. Merge your paragraphs together; right now, they make no sense. But, story line is good. Best of luck, kid!

I am Kaspar

I've only read the first chapter due to being work overloaded at the moment, but, I regret not reading this before. I love your style, the way you describe the scenarios. You've great potential, Alicia. Keep moving!

Poetry

I like this poem. Feelings and emotions are nicely expressed. Did a good job ;)

Family House

The plot's arrangement is quite good, honey, but you need to pay attention to the punctuations and the spellings. Rest all if fine. Good Luck!

Underneath

Intriguing title, though not my type of book. A nice one, though. Keep writing, make the chapters a bit longer.

This book

The story is well written and the plot is good. Keep writing!

Children of the Plague

The title itself is quite intriguing and interesting. I'd say that this story is good. But, you need to work on describing the emotions a bit, to give this story the peefect ending stroke. Loved it❤

Submission

Well, I didn’t see any character development in this story. What about the protagonist? About her life? Her ambitions? And her love interest? Tell something about that man. Describe him. Grow and develop the characters. As a dominant myself, I chose to read this book. And only we know that it's always the submissives who hold the real power.

Nightmare

The title suits the type of story you're going for. It's subtle, yet dark. A kind which I prefer reading. You have talent, love. Keep writing.

The Cursed Boy

I've read the first few chapters and can I just say how different and capturing this book is? It has really caught my attention. I'll read the whole stuff. Great work, author! Kudos❤

REVIEW

The plot is great. Grammer needs a bit improving, but that's all. I liked it.

What my grandmother taught me

This story is going good so far. Maybe, try making the chapters a bit longer? That would really do the trick. Good luck!

In sickness and in health

Honestly, I came to read this story only because I was promised a review swap in return. But this, this is amazing. The plot is so very different and it got me hooked. I read your first book "Writer's sword' too, and that really helped me with my writing. You are brilliant. Kudos!

Dangerous love

Dark, sexual romance stories are absolutely my type. This book is good. Improve the grammer a bit. Describe the emotions a bit more, and you're there, dear author!

HELLBOUND

Okay, the title of the book has me intrigued. The plot line is good, suspenseful and is a page turner. I have read only three chapters yet, but I'm gonna read it all. The author knows where the story is going. So, I like it.

SHORT STORIES

I love this book. Correct some punctuations and grammer errors, and there you are, perfect. I love this book. Keep updating.

UPDATE!

The blurb was so catching and the plot is amazing. I read the book, and I love the characters. Please, update soon!

HEIR OF THE MOON

Well, first of all, I love the title of your book. Probably, you could improve your grammer a bit. The story line is good, filled with fantasy, is kind of scary. You express emotions nicely, which is a plus point. I look forward to read more.

REVIEW

Actually, I like this book. Work on the grammer a bit, and everything else is amazing.

REVIEW

I loved the title of the book, and, the book is uniaue, different. I really enjoyed it this far. I hope you're going to keep up the good work, love. All the best.

EXPERIENCE ME

Well, I love the name Silas, truly. And, the book is quite nicely written, though, I'd like you to keep some small things in mind, like using of capital letter just after a full stop, and some grammatical mistakes are also present. Do edit it when the book is done. But anyways, I loved the book.

REVIEW

First of all, I like a good mystery book, and to my pleasure, this is one. I like the pace of the book, and the writing style you use. All the best!

My review

Being homeless is hard, and you have portrayed it beautifully. Plot is unique, and I'm a sucker for gay romance as I myself write many of those. You could use a bit more sophisticated words, but emotions are expressed perfectly. Can't wait to read more!

REVIEW

Man, you can't keep us hanging with this. This book is simply brilliant! Where are the updates? I fucking love it

REVIEW

I don't know why this story is rated so less. It's actually amazing!

Review :

This story is actually very detailed and is extremely intriguing. Absolutely perfect. Keep going!

Story

A very good start. Definitely interested. Can't wait to read more

Broken Family

Good start. Grammar needs to improve, so does writing style. Keep going.

REVOLUTION

You're doing a great job, so far. Keep up the good work. Will be waiting for more

Review

The story plot is good and the writting engages the reader to keep reading. But one thing, look after the indentation of the paragraphs and the grammar. Other than that, it's amazing. The plot could be better, but it's okay.

REVIEW

I don't think that you know we have to use a word starting with a capital letter after we end a line with fullstop. That's very silly. The writing style is bleak, and hasn't gotten me hooked. Try improving. Try giving things some details. Emotions are not expressed properly. Good day.

Review

Gawd, this book is different from the others I've read. I've read a few chapters, but this has me hooked. The genre promises something different and entertaining. I'll tell you — it's worth the read.