Daniel

Riverside

Got born - Grew Up - Went Bad - Got Busted - Reformed - Grew Old - Went Bad Again - Glory!!!

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Very Enticing

This story "A Half Orphan" Encompasses the clash between the modern world and old traditions and values superbly. The effects upon multiple characters who are all caught in apparently hopeless and soul wrenching delimas by trying to do the right thing from their prospective and culture engulfs the reader with anticipation as to how it will all end. The reader comes to understand and care about each one and the problems they face. The main character is especially endearing and special. Great plot and great story. A very nice job of portraying a different culture and immersing the reader into that world. I enjoyed this very much. I must agree that it needs some editing and occasionally the flow is interrupted by the grammatical and structural errors. Nice job!

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Enticed

At the start I didn't think it was going to be very good. How wrong I was. As I read it pulled me in and enticed me into reading the rest. Very imaginative and mysterious. I like it.

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Captivating and Unique

Ash presents conflicting emotions in a unique and powerful way. Her writing style is both captivating and mysterious. I will be looking forward to reading the rest of the story once it is finished. There seems to be some confusion about the usage of singular and plural wording referring to the Puppeteer. What seems to be a singular creature is referred to as they. Maybe there is a reason for this but it is somewhat confusing to me. I am sure that this will be addressed in revisions as this is a work in progress. Good job. I would encourage Ash to keep writing. Her talent and passion should be expressed. I would recommend this book as well worth reading.

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The best I have ever read

Love it. A brilliant and captivating story. It brings home the absolute seriousness of our need to have a close and meaningful relationship with Christ and the destructiveness of living without Him. The graphic images portraying the nature of sin are gripping and compel us to see evil in it's true nature. This story touches my heart in a very special way.

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Eye Opener

Cyber Match is a real eye opener to those who are not savvy to the real dangers out there in the Cyber Dating world. I think it should be "required reading" for those before they enter those sites. It is a very well written and interesting read. The dialog is handled very well. This could have been quite a challenge since there is so much going on. Good Job!

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Well Done - Liked It

Seriously I don't think I can compete with the elaborate reviews already posted. I can say that this story is captivating and full of potential for a movie and possibly lead to a couple more. Animal rights people and environmentalists should especially like this one. It is in a sense a "clean up dodge" theme in a much more interesting setting with a fascinating hero and characters. The readers get that satisfied sense of relief they crave when the bad guys are taken out by Rufus. Overall good reading, good plot and execution. Good Job.

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