dapharoah69

Miami

I'm Blunt. AuTHOR iWrite Vampires. Erotica. Poetry. I. Am. Art Non commercialized visionary The King of Erotica Danced for Gavin Degraw for Orange Bowl Half Time Show MIAMI

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I been there

This really tore me up inside. I tried to kill myself through my teens, never feeling wanted. And my bestfriend I lost when I was 19 and I carry that pain till this day. Rarely do I cry and I'm sitting here crying remembering...

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Awesome book

I enjoyed reading this. Your an awesome writer. Your use of metaphors is very good. Very well written.

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Outstandingly good

I love everything about this story. Keep up the great writing

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Valentina Shines

This is a great series. Not too heavy, light on the eyes and heart and filled with characters I can relate to, people I talk to daily in real life offline and off social media. Great job. And I hope you continue writing quality work.

DAPHAROAH69

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Timeless

I am in LOVE with mother. I am sitting here balling. I hope she didn't die trying to leave war torn Poland. She said she wanted to give Otto a glimmer of hope. Sometimes a sacrifice for the one you love to have a few more moments of life than you is a martyr moment. The story line is outstanding. You pulled me in from the very beginning. Kudos to you. Great book.

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Outstanding

As a full time writer (during Quarantine ha, ha) I'm always writing, its my addiction. I rarely stop to read, but when I do I make my time and what I chose to read worth it. I wasn't prepared to read about some memorable characters and a fae princess. How cool is that...? Even the history of the fae's and the dividing territories is sheer genius. (snap, snap). I love RAILYN, let me just get that out of the way. Head strong and vibrant. The way you describe her features is awesome in itself. The way she kicked that guard's butt when he tried to abuse her in prison was freaking amazing. And Lola reminds me of my dog Gizmo whom died from a hit and run 9 years ago, breaking my heart. I enjoyed this book, I hate that it wasn't longer. I say this with aplomb and joy: Thank you for quality work. You have a new fan and supporter. DAPHAROAH69

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Lame, Lame, Lame

Dapharoah69. Da, slang for "the." Pharoah is spelled wrong because its symbolic, as I expressed in my autobiography The Kingdom. It reminds me of my white first grade teacher when I spelled it wrong and she said I'd never be nothing in this life and that blacks were only slaves and never Kings and Queens. So know what you're talking about before you talk, bum. I am sorry that I took 10 minutes out of my schedule to read your one chapter disaster. There's a reason this lame, non imaginative story is unfinished. He's too busy dropping one star ratings on three different stories because he's jealous. This is a site for supporting one another as authors, not a site of hate. This story to needs stay one chapter. Any author that comes on my page insulting my readers deserved to be called out. My Facebook followers that has followed me for ten years, my husband, my nieces and friends read my book and love it. His review was made out of bias and bigotry and that's NOT going to stop me from achieving greatness.You mad? If you love Shakespeare, a plagiarist by the way, then your story doesn't reflect your taste. I have 8 Barnes and Noble bestsellers, over 1,000 (5) Star reviews, featured in 2,000 + book clubs, five author of the year awards, 4,000 preorders for The Law of Beasts, Man of Integrity award from a U.S. Senator in October for my career achievements and being a community leader since being homeless ten years ago, I've worked with New York Times Bestsellers. If my readers say I'm a genius then deal with it. You'll get over it. DON'T READ THIS STORY. It's a waste of time. Now you enjoy your day and take some creative writing classes because you suck worse than a bulimic chick slurping erections for the taste. Don't come for me bitter fool becuase I will clap back. Get on my level, then we can talk. Deuces.

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More!

As soon as I got into it it ended! Noooooooooooooo! I really hope you write more. I absolutely love this. Reminds me of my teenager years.

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Beautifully Written

There's a reason why out of all the writers on inkitt you're one of my favorite. Reading stories from a woman standpoint is something I rarely do, because of the lack of great stories, but this was not only a quick read but it's erotica and it's right up my alley. You are awesome very awesome writer. And thank you for reading my book Redemption. That brought me back here to finish reading one of many of great gems you have on your page. Great job.

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Great Read

I really enjoyed this. Plot, writing style and excecution is very good.

Dapharoah69
The King of Erotica

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Very good book

I enjoyed your book. Keep up the good work.

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I like your work

I really enjoyed reading your book.

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I enjoyed your work

I enjoyed reading your book. Great job my friend

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I LOVE THIS

Your imagination thrives in this book. So poetic, yet its not poems. I love the characters, especially Jackie. My mother in law's name is Jackie. The way you've structured the book reads like a diary without coming off as one. Great book!

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BEAUTIFUL AND CAPTIVATING

Must I say this is different and beautiful. I felt like I was reading Shakespeare for a minute, but its your lovely prose written through effortless jargon. If skeletons in your family's closet brought about this clever, poignant account, then I'm looking forward to reading more. Excellent.

DAPHAROAH69
THE KING OF EROTICA

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APPLAUSE

You have written a very detailed, poised, and great book. I appreciate great stories. Having written my first book when I was homeless fifteen years ago, now i have over 300 books I wrote that I never published, but you have a gift and I hope you keep it going. The characters had me hot and they have substance. Great work young lady.

DAPHAROAH69
THE KING OF EROTICA

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New fan

I don't read much because I'm always writing, but your book is a much needed distraction. The characters leap off the page and I really enjoyed this. I read all three back to back and it is very well written.

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I really enjoyed your book.

Awesome writing. And your killer ink is commendable. The characters are believable and the plot is awesome. Much love.

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Nooo!!

There has to be more!!! I thoroughly liked this story. Memorable characters. Gripped me from the first paragraph. You are a passionate writer. I really would like to read more.

Dapharoah69

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Wowed

Tyler is such an ass tho! I love your book. I just wish it was more than three chapters. The title is awesome in itself and I'm loving Olivia's voice. I know an Olivia and she kind of reminds me of the Olivia in your book. You have a new fan. Keep writing. It looks good on you.

Dapharoah69

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Lovable

I enjoyed reading your work. I especially like "Stori." Memorable characters are served up in this sinful dish of literature. I really hope you keep writing and releasing more stories.

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Beautifully Written

There is enormous talent on Inkitt. And I'm happy to be a part of it, in any capacity. What an engaging, powerful mixture of emotion wrapped elegantly in a big red bow. My all-time favorite author is VC Andrews. I've read every book she ever wrote, including the ones her Estate released after her passing. "MEMORY" makes me feel what VC Andrews made me feel: a part of the story. I forgot I was an author reading such magnificent words. I am looking forward to more offerings from you.

With love to a fellow author,
Dapharoah69

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A new fan

I thoroughly enjoyed Overcoming Dawn. The title caught my attention at hello. The characters, especially Lyra, my absolute favorite, are engaging and their growth is outstanding. I wish it was longer because I've become a fan. I love reading just as much as I love writing and its nice that I can escape my own life, my own writing, my ow problems and get lost in great fiction.

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Damn

I feel some type of way after reading this.

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Hidden gem

Now its stories like this that makes me appreciate being amongst the best writers ever because it reminds me why I became a writer in the first place. THE LOVE OF READING! In order to grow as a writer you must read, read, read.

Its Now (I love the title btw) is not only a very eclectic read but it is emotionally layered with things that reminded me of my teenage years. Insecure about my body. Coming out about my sexuality. A mother that was never home because she was a federal corrections officer for twenty five years. Maddie's dad was never home as a lawyer so I immediately related to this fine work of art.

If the author doesn't continue this riveting story I will be hugely disappointed. There are a lot of authors on here with a gazillion reviews and likes, those same authors spam pages with links to their books but never review another author' work. I'm for the underdogs, because I was once one, writing my first four books as a homeless man in my later twenties and this story brought up feelings I long suppressed.

Its Now is my favorite story on Inkitt, and I've read hundreds of books on here, but only leave my review on those I actually like or love and I LOVE "Its Now."

Dapharoah69
The King of Erotica

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Yoked

I enjoyed your scribes. Now I must shower!!!

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I love it my friend

Its books like this that reminds me why I love writing. It had me laughing throughout!

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Enjoyed

I started this last night and finished a few hours ago. I absolutely enjoyed your book.

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Good stuff.

You have a way with words. As an author myself this is how I continue to grow by keeping abreast of incredible writing such as your book. I thoroughly enjoyed reading and I hope you write another one. A new fan..

Dapharoah69

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Awesome

I enjoyed your book. You have that killer ink

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VERY INTRIGUED

Moreeee! I enjoyed the first two chapters. Beth, Jonathan, the teacher...the dialogue is fresh, the story flows, and your descriptions and attention to detail is awesome. I would love to read more. Great job! I am anxious to see what happens after she accepted going to the school and how her life will change!

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Good stuff

I enjoyed this .Wish it was longer, but very promising

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Awesome

I enjoyed your story. It's very engaging. It was a quick read, but very good. I appreciate you sharing your story with us.

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Shines

I enjoyed this quick read. Your characters remind me of some people I speak to everyday. I liked JJ and the epilogue is good.

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Not worth it

I lost interest after the first three chapters. When a writer discredits the very people that took the time to read my story with lame accusations, this goes beyond ego. Some of those reviewers are authors themselves and one spoiled apple doesnt stop the show. Imagination and originality is lacking in The Play's the Thing. Maybe her next offering will have more substance.

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Stellar writing

I am author Dapharoah69 on here and I wrote "The Law of Beasts." This story is very good writing. I was already reading this and reserved the last copy because its a great read and out of the few books I read on here, this one is magnetic and inspiring. Kudos to you FreydisMM

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Very promising

I love this. You write very well. Disregard the turd that left that bad review. He's doing that on everyone's story. Keep up the good work my friend.

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