Darla Tverdohleb

Dumaguete

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The Shadow

I think there's a big plot. However, the pacing is slow and dragging. I suppose the horror genre has been skipped so far (read 8 chapters). Instead, the mystery side is built up.

The main character (Miranda) is not well-established, as well as the setting. These can be improved by using the five senses.

There are many errors in using punctuation marks, incorrect word usage, missing words and misspellings, as well as grammatical error and paragraph structure.

If or when improved, I think the story is good. Keep writing, author!

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Interesting!

Of course, after reading some of your works, I can tell this is just another great story. :) There's only minimal technical errors, which will make the story flawless. ;)

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great story! ❤️

What else can I say? ;)

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Great stories! ❤️

The first especially gave me goose bumps! 😃
Keep writing! ❤️❤️

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loved it! 😍

Just awesome! I love the characters and the story. 💖💖 Would love to read more! Can't wait! Stay safe! 💖💖

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