darlaAmores

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Intriguing

Kudos to the author for depicting what I presume as teens angst. Bitching about your least favorite teachers with your friends - or lovers, and expressing your frustration internally, it was very entertaining to read that!

Till this day, I still dislike mathematics that I'd rather write a ten page essays. I enjoy reading things that I can relate to, (minus the 18+ part) and I'm sure other would too.

I'd love to know how Lisa and Rohit first met and even hope that their relationship can go beyond fulfilling each other's desires in the future chapters.

So far, I believe that you'll be able to improve and I think that you're doing really well!

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Can't stop scrolling!

I just read the first chapter and it was bomb! TBH, I was quite excited when I saw a fantasy tag on your story since I'm a sucker for that genre heheh. Okay, where should I begin?

Luca? He's shining so bright. I like that he was setting things straight with Nelania (I mistakenly read her name as Melania Trump at first glance) and was firm with her, he's under my personal spotlight for now. Most favorite part? Probably the part where he'd agreed with Nelania when she said he wasn't even familiar with romantic love as he gave her an advice saying that she'd have a good life with her to-be husband. That was a 10/10 for me.

And Nelania? From your summary and your title, I'm taking a guess that she'll be the leading lady? She's not too stubborn but not too submissive either, she countered almost everything that Luca said but eventually understood when Luca drew the line. I can't say I like her yet, but her determination? I wish I had half of hers. She seemed so obsessed with the concept of great love that I couldn't help but to feel sorry for her, I don't know why the mayor thought marrying his youngest daughter off was a good idea. Oh well, I look forward to see more of her in the upcoming chapters!

Please keep updating since I'm already hooked on your story! You're doing very well, author!

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In for dramatic love conflicts

I quite enjoy it, it's fun to read as I see your writing style improvement over the few next chapters. I love that Olivia is firmly resisting that a-hole Colt (totally shipping her with Gabriel) and I look forward to see more cute interactions between Olivia and her son, Maverick. Good job!

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