Can't stop scrolling!
I just read the first chapter and it was bomb! TBH, I was quite excited when I saw a fantasy tag on your story since I'm a sucker for that genre heheh. Okay, where should I begin?
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Luca? He's shining so bright. I like that he was setting things straight with Nelania (I mistakenly read her name as Melania Trump at first glance) and was firm with her, he's under my personal spotlight for now. Most favorite part? Probably the part where he'd agreed with Nelania when she said he wasn't even familiar with romantic love as he gave her an advice saying that she'd have a good life with her to-be husband. That was a 10/10 for me.
And Nelania? From your summary and your title, I'm taking a guess that she'll be the leading lady? She's not too stubborn but not too submissive either, she countered almost everything that Luca said but eventually understood when Luca drew the line. I can't say I like her yet, but her determination? I wish I had half of hers. She seemed so obsessed with the concept of great love that I couldn't help but to feel sorry for her, I don't know why the mayor thought marrying his youngest daughter off was a good idea. Oh well, I look forward to see more of her in the upcoming chapters!
Please keep updating since I'm already hooked on your story! You're doing very well, author!