David

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Intriguing story

I really like the premise of this story. Someone so young would be burdened by keeping other people's secrets. The notebooks give a good possibility for future plot twists. I kept thinking what if the notebook with all the secrets gets out, or is published on the internet for everyone to see?
I could have used a few more details when it comes to the school setting, or the town. Teachers are described as just teachers, I need a little more so I can visualize for myself. I got a sense of the protagonists's home and mother, but not the school community.
Overall, an enjoyable read.

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Don’t turn around

It was an intriguing story, but I felt the author concentrated on the plot at the expense of characters. I could anticipate all the twists and there were no surprises or revelations of character.

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