David Renick
@davidrenick
I grew up over seas. Lived through a successful revolution. As an adult, lived in China and Thailand. I love to write stories with action, mystery and double meanings.
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar & Punctuation
Engaging and tense
I was quickly engaged in the first scene. Second chapter gave a good back story for the war. Maybe a bit more explanation for the motivation for the enemy's behavior. I feel that the story line is strong with a lot of potential.
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