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Very interesting ,full of drama , adventure . Good grammar and vocabulary . Very romantic ,intriguing and colourful . I just love Noah . Such a cool guy

Very interesting, romantic, exciting.full of love scenes .dramatic, colourful. Full of passion and compassion but sorrowful in some areas especially when Jack just died like that leaving Kate all alone

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This so lovely ,very interesting and romantic .Logan is so loving despite all his money .I like thier kind of love . Jensen really suffered from the hand of those evil people , she lost some of her fingers and toes . Who are the people behind this evil deed on Jensen . I love Logan and Jensen’s kind of love

This is so good , so interesting . Full of love scenes and sex scenes . Very intriguing. Logan is a very loving , kind , caring , compassionate, considerate lover . Jensen is lucky to have Logan , she has got an everlasting love

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So interesting , full of drama, love scenes , romance . Lucan really loves Jack and always expresses his love to Jack .But there seems to be a lot of blood bath . Hopefully Lucan will survive the injury

This is so interesting, dramatic, full of adventure, love scenes, emotional,romantic and sex scenes . I like the way Lucan expresses his live to Jack . He love Jack so much andJack reciprocates the love . This is so good . I do hope their love will sustain all

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This is so interesting ,full of love scenes .sex scene .no rough play . Bella and Warren just fit into each other like a jig saw puzzle . Wow ,Bella is so lucky to fall in love with a billionaire who is ready to do everything for her . This is a real love story

This is so interesting,nice story , line good drama . Good grammar and good vocabulary. This is so romantic and a good love story with lots of sex scenes . I love it .No violence or blood shed

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This is so dramatic . Noah and Valerie are one of a kind . How can they be having sex in broad daylight . That is so ridiculous , and unbecoming . Wow the kind of attraction between both of them is so strong that it is unbreakable

I do hope that Valerie and Noah will be able to resolve their differences and warm up to each and become real romantic lovers not stalemate . The really can resist each other and there is a strong attraction for each other

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This is really tough . This is real warfare . I do hope they win against Giuseppe and they eradicate the Giuseppe Mafia and Verity becomes a free citizen and I do hope nobody dies because they are fighting to save her life . That will be too much for her if anything happens to anyone if these people

This serious. All because of Verity. I really don’t understand the issue about her being worth millions of dollars . . I really feel for Verity and Daniel , they never have time to express their feelings for each other . It is one incident after another

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Very interesting ,full of drama ,action , passion and personality with toxic and obnoxious characters like Dolly and her friends . But Aubrey is too simple , why would you allow a girl like you to bully you to a level that it becomes physical and you are not even reacting back

This is so serious, this kind of bullying is unheard of . I don’t know how Aubrey will allow a girl like her to break her ribs without her even mentioning it to her parents so that the 2 parents can meet and they can both trash it out in the school premises with teachers

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This is so dramatic , very interesting , full action , passion , love intermingled . Eveline is blessed she so many people that love and adore her so much . Not only her family but fiends

I am happy the way that Lucas is handling the relationship between Eveline and Enzo Even though he has not accepted the relationship totally , I guess he will have to do so when he realizes that he is going to become a Grandpa soon

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This is so interesting , so good . Exciting . You don’t want to drop the book for a moment because at every turn something is bound to happen . Rebecca had so many filings with almost 3 men . It’s so full of drama , romantic , love and sex scene I do love this novel

This is one of my best novel . I love it so much . Rebecca and Lucas are match made from heaven . Nobody can separate them Lucas is so faithful for a man whereas is just satisfying her sexual whims with every man that comes her way . This is so bad for a woman

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This is so good ,so interesting .full of love romantic . Sex.adventure , drama . The grammar is good also the vocabulary . Very touching and a little sad . . Lein is so understanding and reall love Perion . They are made for each other .

So full off compassion, dramatic . Exciting, romantic and love and sex scenes I love both Perion and Lein . But Perion is such a stubborn lady sometimes.

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Very interesting and very touching and very romantic

It so interesting, full of love scenes and sex scenes.. very romantic. Nick and Ellie really love each other , I love thier romantic live. I am so happy that Ellie was able to go to Havard university eventually.

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This is so interesting and romantic . Nathaniel is a perfect gentleman ,very dependable . Very loving very helpful , faithfull honest . A giver , patient unlike Lawrence who jumps to conclusions easily . I don’t even know what Amelia sees in Lawrence . I love Nathaniel , ready to loook past all the misdeeds of Leonardo . Alessandra is so lucky to have Nathaniel as lover and husband . This is so exciting and intriguing

I just love this story line . The only thing is some grammar and vocabulary needs to be corrected. Alessandra has really suffered from the hand of the previous man she called father . Her mother is the worst woman you can call a mother and I am not even sure if she has any offspring for Leonardo and yet she didn’t care about her 2 children

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This book is so interesting , I love all the characters in it . I love the story . So full of drama , romantic , full of adventure and have many twists and turns . The story line is so good . I t keeps you up and you want to get to the end of the story

I fell in love with with the story . Melanie really had a rough childhood. I want to know what happened to her starting from age 8 . How did she end up being in the hands of the couple that she thought were her parents, because they don’t care at all for her

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So much bloodbath ,so much discoveries about Luca families . So many hidden secret . The novel has so many different turns at each chapter . I wonder what the end will be .. it is full of drama, intriguing and adventure

I do hope nobody dies again in the family.Adele is becoming very strong and mean . I hope she still has a heart.Axel is birthing so many children even at old age . I do hope that Bridget is for real .Axel has so many secrets that he hides away but all the secrets are catching up with him

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This is so touching , so interesting , dramatic ,intriguing ,with different turn of events .there are so many twists to the novel.it seems that almost 3 men loves Amelia dearly .. She is such a lovable girl . Jax is trickster and double faced person .I wonder how Ivan can see through all Jax trick

I am really enjoying the novel ,it has so many twists to it . But I think it not well organized because events that happened before are now being narrated towards the later end

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This real Drama , well Salvatore has done the best This ihe could possibly do to save Tommy and Saige . I do hope Salvatore’s wife will please be reasonable and allow her husband to stay at home . It is for the safety of the couple

This novel is intriguing,very interesting, full of drama and romantic with lots of love scenes , sex scenes. I like Tyler and Trevor’s love like the most . Oh my God Saige really suffered in the hand of Alina . I think Saige should be the one to deal with Alina and get rid of Alina completely by herself

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This is so interesting , full of action , very real . I love Keena and Tyler . They are both very real, both full of determination and action . Tyler is headstrong so also is Keena . Tommy exposed Saige to too much risk . Saige suffered so much and Tommy was not smart enough to prevent it

I like the way Tyler convinced Trevor right away that they have to go and deliver Keena from Davide when Davide captured Keena again . Tyler is very assertive and knows what he wants and goes for it .This book 2 romance is more interesting than book 1

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This is really exciting , action packed , sensual , , full of love and sex scenes . Very bloody and violent in all . It is quite enjoyable however I wish Saige would have been educated in or or two ways . Now she is picking up and getting more aggressive .That’s Kudos to Bobby and the other partner

This is quite interesting, intriguing, very dramatic and full of violence. It is also bloody, however it has some love and sex part.it is like any time Tommy takes Saige out to anywhere it always ends in bloodbath

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This is so interesting and very romantic . I love Lucan the way he expresses love to Jack . He really loves Jack intensely and he shows it , showering her with gift and everything and taking care of her physical and emotional need.This is a real love story book .it is full of drama,, passion , romance and sex scenes

I just love this book , Both Lucan and Jack do respect each other , they don’t shout nor say abusive words to each other . They both full of love romance and passion for each other. This is exciting, intriguing and interesting

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Wow this is so interesting , intriguing , full of drama , love scenes and sex languages .Alexa is such a darling . Her adolescent life is so pitiable .She was so much traumatized as a child by a pervert. I do hope she will be able to totally get over all the problems she had when she was young and move on in life

I would like to know what actually happened to Alexa and Kathy’s biological Dad . Why is the Dad not around so save the children, unless their Mum was kept a mistress by Flamur and then he still kidnapped his own children

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This so interesting , action packed , full of sex scenes and love scenes.Romantic , dramatic , bloody and too much police intervention .Lucas is a little possessive .

This is a really interesting book . Full of action , bloody , romantic to certain extent . Full of sex scenes and exciting.It keeps you tense and you want to know the next thing . Taylor is trying so much to understand Lucas

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Not bad . It took such a long time before they realize their feelings for each other. It is quite an interesting book with good grammar and vocabulary

It was quite interesting and of course Dimitri I’d a funny guy . I wonder how Keena could agree someone with no strings attached for a whole . Can that be possible.No way feelings will come up especially in opposite sex

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This is soo interesting , humorous , makes me laugh so much , dramatic , full of sex scenes.very honest and realistic people . I really love the book . I don’t want it to end .it is full of open and and transparent thoughts about how Grace and Cendric feels about each other . It makes you laugh unending . I give a lot of kudos to the author . She did a good write up.The grammar is good and the vocabulary is very good

Good job . Very interesting novel . Very humorous. Makes someone laugh so much that you don’t want to drop it .The are lots of romance and sex scene and love scenes too . But overall I will rate the author and score her 100 percent well done job

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This third book is action packed, very interesting ,exhilarating , you don’t want to drop it . You want to get to the end , full of passion , emotion , few love scenes and Hayley is a great hero, very intriguing , Good grammar and good vocabulary , tempting

This is such a good , book to read , full action , drama, romance , love scenes , emotional. Touching , compassions and love .it helps someone and teaches you to love and protect your loved ones

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Very interesting , very bloody , exciting , exhilarating , full of romance , sex scene , sometimes humorous and action packed

Well written , good grammar, good vocabulary. Full of action . Love scenes , romance all the way , sex scenes , action packed .Very exciting and emotional sometimes. You don’t want to stop reading . It keeps you occupied all through

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It is bloody ,messy .full of sexy angles and highly intriguing . A little bit romantic

It is quite interesting,Luca is turned between showing love and acting like Mafia..it is full of bloody scenes. Very captivating and keeps someone highly motivated and you Keep wanting to read on

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Very interesting ,humorous ,romantic ,full of sex episodes and lovelines.Action packed,new technologies based and adventurous .i do really love reading it .very captivating

Very interesting,full of drama ,romance,sex ,adventures,love stories .very humorous,action packed and intriguing.i can’t even stay away from reading it and I am so much engrossed with it

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Very interesting , dramatic , Romantic and intriguing breathtaking you don’t want to stop but to keep reading it to the end. Really inspirational and humorous and full of sex episode

Very interesting, romantic, humorous, dramatic with lots of sex scenes ,also very intriguing. You don’t want to drop the book but to keep reading untying the end .It is full of sone sad and melancholic part

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Very romantic , dramatic with good grammar and vocabulary.Also a sad and melancholy in some area but otherwise very interesting and enjoyable ..

Very interesting, Romantic, dramatic and full of humour and love scenes .!Also there are some sad and melancholic part there that is a quite disturbing. However it is well written with good grammar and vocabulary

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5 star

Enjoying everything .The story is so interesting ,full of drama, humour and romance .Also full of knowledge about disease and medical terminology . Suspense highly intriguing.Goof vocabulary, good grammar .

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