Dazzling Star (sulochana)

Overall good

Well sweet story about friendship turning into relationship...no much drama just straightforward and to the point... but I see you need to break the paragraphs in some places and also I found mixing up of tenses... Overall it was good....

Intresting

Well plot is interesting and captivating but it's confusing with change in scene likewise in my view you have involved so many suspense from the very beginning only which is kind of confusing but I do suggest this story to all for its polt keep it with your good work

Intresting Plot

Story plot is interesting with amazing flow. I like the way character are described. But I think somewhere paragraphs needs to break. In my view paragraph are to long....😊😊😊😊 hoping to read further 💕💕💕 keep up with your good work☺️☺️☺️

Nice introduction part

introduction part is good and I didn't found any mistakes so far. Plot is promising and Author have done a great job I liked the way you wrote in simple understanding way... Will be looking forward to read more in Upcoming days

reviews that I want to drop

Well I am not able to find a perfect matching word to describe this story. it is amazing, captivating, interesting all in one. I really loved this story and it's plot. Just with three chapters it made me desperate to read the ending... I am so in love with this story and eagerly looking forward to read the further chapters please don't make us wait long i will be looking-forward to read it's next chapter...

Interesting plot

The story is captivating and has very interesting plot. When I read the first three chapters I felt to read it more... keep it up author... I will be waiting for your next updates...

Overall good

The story is good and the plot is interesting... But found the paragraphs too long which can make readers to read whole sentence with a break... Overall it is good