Dazzling Star (sulochana)

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Overall good

Well sweet story about friendship turning into relationship...no much drama just straightforward and to the point... but I see you need to break the paragraphs in some places and also I found mixing up of tenses... Overall it was good....

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Intresting

Well plot is interesting and captivating but it's confusing with change in scene likewise in my view you have involved so many suspense from the very beginning only which is kind of confusing but I do suggest this story to all for its polt keep it with your good work

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Fascinating and intersting

Story is fascinating and intersting as well... I like the concept about Fantasy world... Your writing style is good and the characters are captivating Keep up your good work yoh truly are an amazing Writer very best wishes for your upcoming future

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Intresting Plot

Story plot is interesting with amazing flow. I like the way character are described. But I think somewhere paragraphs needs to break. In my view paragraph are to long....๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š hoping to read further ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’• keep up with your good workโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

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Nice introduction part

introduction part is good and I didn't found any mistakes so far. Plot is promising and Author have done a great job I liked the way you wrote in simple understanding way... Will be looking forward to read more in Upcoming days

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Incredibly amazing creation

I genuinely got so hooked up with this story and got so attracted just the way magnetic get's attracted to iron. I am in middle of the story but can't stop dropping my reviews. I just can't stand still appreciating your beautiful creation. I am loving every bit of this story from plot to characters all are perfectly described and well planned the best thing I loved about author is the way you describe every things in details from Character appearance to surrounding areas I really really loved it I really want to learn from you๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š can you teach me please..๐Ÿ˜Š I am not just enjoying this story but also learning so many things which I was actually lacking in my story and was totally unkown. Author you are truly an amazing Writer with incredibly talented and creative mind... keep it up I have become your huge fan now๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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reviews that I want to drop

Well I am not able to find a perfect matching word to describe this story. it is amazing, captivating, interesting all in one. I really loved this story and it's plot. Just with three chapters it made me desperate to read the ending... I am so in love with this story and eagerly looking forward to read the further chapters please don't make us wait long i will be looking-forward to read it's next chapter...

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Interesting plot

The story is captivating and has very interesting plot. When I read the first three chapters I felt to read it more... keep it up author... I will be waiting for your next updates...

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Overall good

The story is good and the plot is interesting... But found the paragraphs too long which can make readers to read whole sentence with a break... Overall it is good

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