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Virgie's Take

"Dane was the dream come true. Luna was too young to understand the mate bond. Dane was patient. The fact that she looked similar to his first love was a distraction. Thanks for the entertainment."

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Inspiring

"It was riveting and intriguing making hard to stop read and put down. "

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Alpha Dane

"This may be a short story, but it is a complete story. I'm glad Mia found happiness after the way her father treated her. There were a few surprises in the story I didn't see coming. Dane has had enough disappointment and pain he deserves to have a second chance. I'm glad they found each other. Fantastic job author. 💞🩷💞"

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Alpha Dane

"I was captivated by this story. I had a very hard time putting this book down to go to sleep. It's definitely a must-read."

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Alpha Dane

"this was a really short, but a really good book! There were some surprises such as all three of them being brothers. I love her character and I love Dane and I think they made a pretty damn good couple. I would’ve liked to hear more about Kendra‘s life, but that’s OK anyway good book and I’m off to share. Thanks for writing."

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Alpha Dane

"I love the storyline. Each chapter is different and keeps a reader in suspense."

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Pretty good short story!!!

"Hope to read longer stories from this author!!! Love it!"

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True Mate Bond?

"Enjoyed the storyline and was intrigued with the plot. Haven't read books with the alpha willingly allowing his mate to determine the pace of the relationship. Would love to read a long version of this book. Thanks for a quick read."

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Alpha Dane

"Easy to read loved to read the story well written "

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Brenda’s thoughts

"This to me was very long and drawn out.But I liked the plot the characters and how it turned out ."

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Loved it

"Had me hooked from the beginning. Read it all in 1 day. "

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Alpha Dane

"Beautiful story. True love and mate that grew more as the years went by. Lots of intrigue and drama"

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Amazing

"This author was by far more talented than her years. Her writing will keep you interested and make you feel as if your in the book itself. I am so excited about this new creation she has put before us. "

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Alpha Dane

"The story was ok if you were looking for a quick short read. There wasn't much of a plot, and it took some time to get into the story as I didn't feel it. "

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