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Becoming Whole

"Yes, the Dragons! I will have to read your books all over again when your done. I'm hooked! OMG! I want with baited breath til you write again! You are very good ❤️"

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Alex

"This is the third book I am reading written by Rio, and I find his plotting and character development stimulating. Keeps the suspence and leaves no small detail unexplored or misused. Since the first book, the writer has installed all the elements that would unravel to the fascinating story of lord Asura. Really, genuinely enjoy this series, and as most already reviewed Alex is one of the most interesting characters and the relationship with Blade one of the most sophisticated and well developed. "

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Alex

"I am really enjoying this book. Alex is an interesting character as are others. I was hoping that by taking my time and rereading this book I would not catch up to you. But alas, I am waiting patiently for chapter 49 and more.😊"

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Excellent

"This series is very good. The link remains clear and the plot twists are excellent. I love this series so far and am looking forward to more. "

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writting skills

"I truly enjoyed your story and found the characters absolutely captivating Have you ever had any artwork drawn for your story? "

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Alex

"You can write¡!!"

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