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Phenomenal

"Love this novel and it had me highly emotionally invested to Luca and Serefina! Bravo! Fabulous job!"

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Damm steamy

"Omg so steamy and wild. "

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Outstanding writing!

"This is my favorite story and I’m really looking forward to what comes next. "

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Amazing story

"Please keep writing"

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Triple Pucked

"Didn't see that coming....waiting with bated breath for the next chapters "

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Good read

"I’m hooked on the story. Of coarse wanting the princess and her “sex God” to make it out together, with his legs working. It’s always mind blowing for me to read what comes from an authors imagination. There are a few small typos that need to be corrected. Other than that, I look forward to what springs to life from this creative authors mind!"

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Triple Hits

"You have hit every emotion that I have! The Don will not lose. He cannot lose. Luca and Tyler are screwed. Mafia will win. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the great read."

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One of the best 🌶🌶🌶🌶 read I ever had

"Sex galore. But it never gets boring - there are no repetitive words and phrases that would have killed all the mood. It's really very-very well written. To the point where you instinctively press your thighs together reading it.😉 The plot is captivating, twists leave you hanging and craving for more. I've binge read it, more like devoured it one go. I need to know what's going next. So here is my review. (Actually very smart idea to trade new chapters for reviews 😁) The only thing I don't like is new POVs - Gia and her boyfriend. I need to know what has happened with Fina not to be distracted by new characters 🙃 Please, upload the next chapter, or better three chapters 😉"

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Tripled pucked

"Love this book so far the dynamic between all characters is amazing. I have not put this book down since I started reading it at lunchtime so can’t wait for more."

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who doesn’t love forbidden mafia erotica?

"this story is fantastic 🖤 i’m obsessed with fina, she owns her sexuality without shame and with confidence. she knows what she wants and goes for it in the most eye popping way. 👑♥️✨🔥"

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Triple Pucked

"Very hot and spicy! I love the strong sexual feelings between Fina and Luca! That is until Don Leone interfered…he should have let things play out between Fina and Luca. I think Marco should somehow let Luca know that Fina had nothing to do with the things her father said or the threats he made to Luca. I know Marco did not think it was right but not much he could do about it at the time. The Don definitely put a damper on the feelings that Luca had! I am an avid reader, I have not stopped reading from the beginning of the story to now where Luca was ushered into Fina’s room and is very unhappy with the Don and Fina…I am dying here…how soon till I have more chapters to read?"

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HOT AS HELL

"I love the story. It is actually romantic but sexy as hell. Please give the girl her orgasm! It is so seductive. I can’t wait for more 🫠"

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Triple pucked

"How can I read more chapters? I'm absolutely loving this book so far and I am dying to see what happens next. I'm beginning you for more!!! PLEASE "

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Spicy but good altogether

"I'm liking the book so far. They are hot for each other. I hate that he is upset with her cause it's not her fault. Even if I'm not the mob I was a daddy's girl so I know that feeling lol. I just hope he proves to her all the things he's promised and maybe be able to take on the mob world with her. Love and happiness can happen in the mafia too. "

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Sizzling !

"Hhhhmmm at first the sex was too much,but the plot goes hand in hand with the sex...ohh la la"

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wonderfulllllllllllllll

"i would beg you on my knees to post a new chapter its amazinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg"

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Triple pucked

"This book has had me drawn from the beginning, the character plot is amazing so spicy but sentimental and they are courageous, beautiful writing I have absolutely no negativity towards the book because it’s just that amazing."

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The triple packed princess

"The story is so fantastic but yet to be erotic The vocabulary is perfect and punctuation is okay Indeed the author has studied literature I like that there are a few characters in the story"

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Thrilling

"I really like the thrill between Luca and Fina😋😋 it keeps me at the edge!!!:)"

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Yesssss

"Please write more asap. I need more. This is amazing writing."

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