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Holy betrayal

"Not my usual type of story, but I was hooked after one chapter. You have a gift!"

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Holy Betrayal

"The writing is good n made me feel emotional when Todd was dying. "

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Like it a lot

"Very sweet story with sensible characters"

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To bad the end was there!

"I loved it. I cried a lot. And laughed a lot. But I didn’t want it to end!"

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Sad

"When I was in nursing school I did several rotations at John’s Hopkins Hospital in the children’s oncology unit .I left everyday crying everyday. So sad .Had a rotation in pedi neuro unit and went to the O.R. With Dr Ben Carson. ♥️( he was wonderful to staff ,students and families) I had thought about doing peds after I graduated but it was so draining and emotional just couldn’t do it.I still think of the kids and their parents 40 yrs later. Your story so far is very good and hits home.love the characters can’t wait for more chapters! Hope her step sister and ex fiancé crash n burn along with her father."

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HOLY BETRAYAL

"I find this story-very compelling. Let me just say I would be interested in reading more of your work. Great Job!"

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