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More please

"Really good character building plot sometimes a little repetative with amara story thread. Main characters well developed need the rest rho the gone to ground witches, lucien Ryton uncovered and the white wolf to show herself mire please soon "

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Lovely

"I thoroughly enjoyed this book! The main characters weren’t one-dimensional. The vampires added a nice twist I wasn’t expecting. Each day I eagerly awaited new chapters. "

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What a bitch Amara is.

"Finding this story very repetative now."

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Not Completed...

"Why does it say it’s completed when it’s clearly not?"

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Dotaz 😀

"Ahoj je to.pekny příběh...bude konec ... dekuji"

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Good story but tons of continuity issues and rushed ending

"This story kept my attention but as it went on the continuity in certain details fell apart. Names changed (the merchant that got Amara into the hotel ball), Rylan could feel Elowen through the mate bond until about halfway through the story when it would have been too convenient. There was no explanation for Rylan's name change and Elowen never learned that she had been chatting with Rylan when talking to that alpha through social media. It was almost like there was a story line and then the author got distracted and changed the direction of the story without realizing. Lots of loose ends. Elowen never shifted. She didn't sleep with Rylan until the end even though there was some indication that she had already. The details would change to fit whatever suspenseful scene needed. It's a good idea for a story but it needs some serious polishing. "

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