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Great read!

"I really enjoyed this novel. The angst, the passion, the love that evolves. The plot development from beginning to conclusion, for its purpose that the author reveals, is excellent. With that said, I think many of the scenes could be flushed out more. I feel like the plot is a skipping stone when it comes to the erotica aspect rather than being fully dunked in. The grammar/spelling could be fixed...I feel like it’s a language crossover issue. And last, this should’ve be tagged stories unless the love scenes are more dramatic...there was only twice that co** penetration was briefly described. It’s more romance. "

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Nice story

"I can relate to this story. Being a child that was a little overweight I can relate to this story. I love how Sarah changed Sebastian into a better man. This is what any person that has ever been bullied could ever ask for. And I love how the author pulled all together. "

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Beautifully written!

"Was difficult to read as I identify with Sarah, her body type and insecurities, and that yes, bullies also exist in families. Beautifully written, from both view points. Well done!"

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