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Crowned My Sins

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Summary

Sarah Long survives college by staying invisible. But when a decades-old ranking ritual crowns her last at the Fresher’s Ball, humiliation drags her into the spotlight. Sebastian Hale, golden, ruthless, untouchable, laughs with everyone else… until she slaps him and shatters his control. He should forget her. Instead, he becomes obsessed. What begins as bullying turns into a dangerous, secret affair filled with tension, heat, and raw vulnerability. And when the cruel ranking resurfaces, Sebastian does the unthinkable. He destroys the system. For the girl who was ranked last. For the girl he chose.

Status
Complete
Chapters
32
Rating
4.4 (5 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

Sarah Long,

has spent her entire life trying to be smaller.

Smaller appetite.

Smaller body.

Smaller presence.

At an elite university where beauty is currency and girls are publicly ranked every year like collectibles, invisibility is her only shield. Until the annual Fresher’s Ball puts her on stage… and crowns her last.

The crowd laughs.

Sebastian Hale,

laughs with them.

Golden, ruthless, untouchable. Senior-year king with a reputation for breaking rules and girls alike. He doesn’t create the ranking system, but he owns the room it breathes in.

Following her after the humiliation was supposed to be entertainment.

Instead, she slaps him.

And in the dark, Sarah unravels years of insecurity, shame, and childhood wounds right in his face.

He should walk away.

He doesn’t.

Something about the quiet girl who refuses to beg crawls under his skin. What starts as curiosity mutates into obsession. Secret meetings. Heated arguments. Kisses that feel like surrender and war at the same time.

He is still cold. Still dominant. Still dangerous.

But in private, Sebastian is the first man who ever looks at Sarah and calls her beautiful like it’s a fact, not a favor.

When the decades-old ranking ritual resurfaces and whispers threaten to destroy her again, Sebastian does the unthinkable.

He burns it down.

For her.

Because kings don’t kneel.

They choose.

And Sebastian Hale chooses the girl who was ranked last.

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You had me at "... she slapped him""! I love strong female leads that stick up for themselves!!

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