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An obsessive love
"I really enjoyed the writing style. Most sentences where short I felt like it was more like internal monologue. Sarah was bullied all her life not only by her mother but school peers. She’s bullied for her weight which causes her to hide in oversized clothes that allow her to hide and not be seen. Sarah really trys to find herself but sometimes finds it difficult to let go of all the body shaming voices she’s had to endured her whole life. Sebastian is the popular guy he has always seen Sarah. He bullies her along with everyone else but I think for him it’s her reactions that he craves she makes him feel which intrigues him at first but somewhere along the way turns into almost an obsession. I think both characters help each other overcome their insecurities, it’s not easy for either of them to trust and I don’t think either intended for anything more to come out of the relationship if thats what you’d call it in the beginning. This isn’t about insta love it’s a love that’s gets the chance to develop over time, a love that comes from getting to know each other on a deeper level, maybe a love that was always there but was never the right time. Overall this was really good. There were a couple of chapters that sort of didn’t make sense but I found it easy to follow what the author was trying to get at. Also it’s written in both points of view so you get what each is going through. "
Great read!
"I really enjoyed this novel. The angst, the passion, the love that evolves. The plot development from beginning to conclusion, for its purpose that the author reveals, is excellent. With that said, I think many of the scenes could be flushed out more. I feel like the plot is a skipping stone when it comes to the erotica aspect rather than being fully dunked in. The grammar/spelling could be fixed...I feel like it’s a language crossover issue. And last, this should’ve be tagged stories unless the love scenes are more dramatic...there was only twice that co** penetration was briefly described. It’s more romance. "
Nice story
"I can relate to this story. Being a child that was a little overweight I can relate to this story. I love how Sarah changed Sebastian into a better man. This is what any person that has ever been bullied could ever ask for. And I love how the author pulled all together. "
Beautifully written!
"Was difficult to read as I identify with Sarah, her body type and insecurities, and that yes, bullies also exist in families. Beautifully written, from both view points. Well done!"
