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The trials of Claremont
"Luved it. Can't wait for book 2"
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Really cool plot! Needs more context!
"I think the premise of the story is really interesting and unique! But I had a hard time following it because there is such little internal character dialogue. And the sentence structure is also a little messy. It’s hard to read from the characters’ perspective because of this."
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To many gaps in the story
"The plot itself is good but the writing is not. There are to many gaps. Details that should have been there but are not making the story hard to follow and confusing. It is also hard to keep track of who is actually apelsins and the interaktion between people is also lacking. It needs work. Read 8 chapters but can’t read more. "
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