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Great!

"This book is great"

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Thumbs up

"Great story!!! Very riveting...sad, love, happiness and war. "

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Sweet tested love story

"I enjoyed the deep love story as it evolved. At some places I wondered at the "fear" which prevented Tria from accepting Ravin earlier, but nevertheless every page was a warm story. Can't wait to read more from the author. "

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Bloody brilliant

"Very well written. Found it to be a beautiful deep story of a love betrayed then found again, cried so much throughout this story"

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The mate he exciled

"I loves it still do eager for the next chapter good book"

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Wow

"This story about being rejected and kicked out from the home and live she knew... found her second chance not by bonds but by her choice of freedom to live freely and to live again in her own time... 😊"

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🙌♥️

"I enjoyed this story well written.good characters😍"

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The Luna he threw away

"Luv story line, I was getting right into it and then reading more Chapters stopped, I was gutted and hope more Chapters come very soon please 🙏 "

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the luna he throw away

"I really enjoyed reading this book. The characters that stood out for me Trai and Ravin. The great love Ravin has shown despite Trai carrying some else pups. The suspense is high. I keep looking forward to the next chapter. Good writig."

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Engaging

"The story was all written. Engaging throughout the entire story. A different type of story. "

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The Luna He Threw Away

"Rejection stories are one of my favorites, this one has a lot of turns and twists, a well recommended story 👌 "

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The Luna He Threw Away

"So well written. Great story lines, plot was compelling and thorough, characters well placed. An excellent read. "

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Awesome story, but what happened to Ravin and Tria???

"So good. I had tears. But want more of the Ravin/Tria story. "

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The Luna he Threw Away

"What a wonderful book, well planned and totally captures the reader. The story is touching, poor Trial having to go through this when pregnant. I like how you twisted her sad departure into a meaningful and heartwarming situation. I hope Ravin takes Trial as his Mate. Thank you for a well written story and delivery. 🥰🥳💐❤️,.....I hope there is a Sequel. "

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I Need MORE!

"I'm so glad this publishes daily because I just started it and I think I'm having withdraws. I'm a big fan of the rejected mate trope but to throw the danger of pregnancy in there too gives it a twist I like. I'm just hoping she ends up with someone who is worthy of her because the dude who tossed her to the side for some other chick definitely isn't worthy of anything!"

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Compelling

"An awesome story! I enjoyed watching the characters grow and mature. I still wonder what happened to Selina. "

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A complicated plot

"I have enjoyed reading this book. It is a complicated plot that could go anywhere. I look forward to finding out how it will continue. "

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Good so far

"Just started this story and haven't been able to put it down.... "

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