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"I really enjoyed both stores. I love the enemies to lovers stories. I would like to see where the kids' story goes. I hope there is more. Thank you for sharing. "
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"I really enjoyed both stores. I love the enemies to lovers stories. I would like to see where the kids' story goes. I hope there is more. Thank you for sharing. "
"I really enjoyed the plots and all of the drama and confusion of Asher and d elena at the start! I highly recommend this book- steamy funny and keeps me on the edge of my seat! Thanks for thus blessing raven!"
"Love your story! Looking forward to reading more!"
"asher is such a tormented character I really feel for Elena Julian Vance entering the scene is sure to complicate things I really like Cole as he is levelheaded as opposed to Asher the plot really is thickening now"
"Simply amazing 😍😍"
"Can’t stop reading, this is absolutely a can’t put down kinda book! Keep up the great work "
"I am loving this story that i just cant wait for author to update!....i love the intensity and writing style so much!!...again requesting to author...pleaseee update soo many chapters at oncee🥹🥹🤎🤎"
"This is an absolutely riveting read. The writing style and characters are very bold and beautiful. I'll recommend this book to everyone I know who loves reading as much as me. Keep up the awesome work."
"Interesting plot, i like the passion emerging from Asher. Even though I doubt a high school student will go that far to doing everything he did for her, the maturity level of such trait is not typical. It’s a good book, keep it up!"
"I like the plot and everything but pleaseeee don't let her end up with Cole🥹🥹🥹"
"I'm not too keen on writing book reviews since I never know how to really do it "right", but this book has brought me back day in and day out for every chapter that's released. It feels very real and the author knows how to keep the story going! Worth reading. "
"Love the drama, the obsession, the tension in the story so far. Writing is smooth and flawless"
"This is a very addictive book, couldn't put it down from the start. Good job author, pls update soon!"
"This was intense and beautiful😍i love this book. I would love to read more hot se* scenes but overall a great book💝❣️😍"
"I enjoyed this story, I love Asher, and Elena they are a tough power couple. The only criticism I have is the fact that some of the story structure was off. Like characters disappearing without any explanation and important characters not flowing throughout important parts of the story. In some chapters the story felt rushed and disorganized, and like the author forgot what roles were played and by whom. Some times when you write a really long story important details can be lost and mistakes are made. I feel like if the story was shorter the author wouldn’t have made so many structural and detail oriented errors. Otherwise the plot was great and the story was interesting❤️"
"I am enjoying the story so far. Characters very relatable and really disliking the antagonist- the father... BOO HISS"
"I am not too keen on a heroin being used as bait or a prize especially because she’s plus size and deemed to be ugly or unfit and that’s not typical female that anyone will fall in love with. I am currently on chapter 18. I’m gonna finish the book out to see how it goes, but right now it’s not what I thought it would be.  and that’s not a bad thing because you should never judge a book by its cover, pun intended. "
"I love this story but.... The drama hasn’t stopped yet. It’s just one thing after another like a damn soap opera my mom watched when I was a kid. They need their peace and happy ever after. Love Sienna and Leo I’m glad her and Asher have help. "