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It's a good book with too much emphasis on discrimination.

Okay so I read this a long time ago..months now actually. I don't remember the characters names safe for uncle Eugene, Ian and Bradon. Okay it's quite different from the gay romance I usually read in a way. There was the disapproving father and supportive mother. Typical coming out the closet drama...but too much effort was put into explaining the philosophy of being gay and people's opinions on them, and emphasis on the discrimination. My point is the characters love felt stale. I didn't experience climax in their relationship, their was no crack or mending. There was really no romance. In summary it would have been better if they stayed friends till the end. A story of a boy helping another boy come out, his struggles and a blossomed happy ever after friendship. The thing about this gay thing is..there is no written commandment that they must fall in love with the person who helped them "come out".

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It's every bit of interesting

I'm glad I finally got around to read it. I like the whole unanswered question of what happened to his parents. I didn't know horror was posed to make me feel sad at the end and not scared. I seriously enjoyed the book. Yes most paragraphs had both characters talking, and those times I had to reread those lines just to know who exactly was speaking. That wasn't difficult in a way, because the characters were well developed and violet had her accent, younno. It's a simple book with a deep plot. Add romance to genre, if that wasn't love then we all have our definition of romance messed up. When it comes out in hard copy, I'm down to buy one. Seriously, I can read this again and again.

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It's sad that he refused treatment.

I hoped he would eventually take treatment. If not for anyone but Hunter.

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An uplifting teen romance

I enjoyed every part of it. I love how the characters developed and were in touch with reality. Their future looks good together. Hope Sadie doesn't fall in love...with some other explorer.. Adventures are bound to happen when you travel round the globe.

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It can't be the end

Are you allowed to write a book this good and leave it hanging. There are so many things to settle in it. I need some sort of closure, please. It was a good book, I enjoyed every bit of it.

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I love every part of this book. It deserves accolades😭

I actually felt sad when it ended. I want more. All the Link's friends from Jupiter, Oliver, Xavier and the rest are just loveable and real. Dear Author, I want more.

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#team Nekayah

I don't know if being a witch is good or being half dead. But I won't mind knowing one. So it's a great book for real. I think Sofia's betrayal hurt the most. There I was voting for hot romance between Sofia and Nekayah. I think there's a moral to this story. Anyway, I enjoyed every part of it and the characters were relatable. Dear Author, you deserve some accolades.

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This is seriously heart warming

I enjoyed every part of it, until Rylan become a jerk. Like he was actually annoying. If Maja didn't get in that accident he wouldn't have approved of her. Well he's lucky she didn't give him a hard. All the characters were relatable, they had flaws and were given options. For me that is good writing. Well done.

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This deserves some accolades

It was well written. And it deserves a lot of love. Every part of the book and Caine's journey can be imagined, to me that's the best kind of awesome. It would be great if it turns out to be a movie. Dear Author, there are so many unanswered questions: will Caine return to the elf princess, will Daphne be his better half. About Alias and why he needs his services for 2 years. The whole immortality thing. I'll say every good book deserves a closure and a movie version.

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Clean and simple

A simple straightforward book. I really like it. And the boys are growing up so quick, I'm rooting for them.

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This book deserves some accolades and a follow up

The suspense was on another level.. Had to read it in bits..cause most times the characters annoyed me with their silly mistakes and other times I just feared for them. How did you come up with a plot this good. I can't wait to see the books as a movie or series. I still need a conclusion, you can't leave a girl hanging.. Who's the fuck is the dark Knight that killed hansel and gretel, and just so you Selvina didn't exactly stop the writer. And why did grandmother whisper her name before dying. Dear author...i know you are busy. But every good book 2 deserves a book 3

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I'm glad I read this book

The first chapter to the last was worth it. I'm voting for their solid relationship. Generally I'm satisfied with the ending and even if there's to be a sequel..don't kill Chase or Felix. Except if you're a "cold heartbreaker"

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Where's book 2?

I loved it from beginning to end. I didn't expect the plot or the twist. But a book this good deserves a book 2. So if you are not too busy; Dear Author, can you provide one. I just want a closure.

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I enjoyed the entire story. From beginning to end.

I need a book two. There has to be a conclusion. You can't leave me knowing Chelsea is pregnant and the King got married to Abigail without the pope's blessings. Seriously, what happened next? Did Chelsea have a boy or girl?

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There should be a sequel. The book is simple yet captivating

The Dunham heiress is on her way back. Bryon Drake survived. I really want a sequel. The Dunham happy ever after is up for a great shock.

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I didn't expect the ending, and that is a good thing for me

I wish Cabbage didn't die. Weird how it sounded like Wesley was anything but human. I kept reading hoping at one time his magical powers would be revealed.

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