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Dee

The overall story is very interesting. It keeps you interested and wanting more. The writer has a good imagination and has a really good future in writing book. You will become very successful. Great job!

Dee

I think that the story is very well written and it's something that holds my interest. It keeps me on the edge of my seat, wondering what's going to happen next. It's so good that I find myself getting impatient for more chapters to be released at a faster pace. ( I know it's hard when you have a life of your own to deal with and you can't always dedicate all your time to your writing.) I love her style of writing there is always twist and turns as you get farther into the story. Some flaws with some of the writing and grammar, but to me it's not a big deal no one is perfect and I don't worry much about it, especially with a good book like this. You can really tell she cherishes her work and takes a lot of time to make it as exciting as she can to keep everyone interested. I don't feel I need to add any idea's to the story because you are doing a great job. I hope to see more stories like this one in the future.