Deliah Adams

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I;m PawPaw's son

A really great pace, just enough tension and description to get to the point quickly, which I like. I would change a few words and expressions, but that's just preference and my editing experience coming through. It is a very enjoyable read and the characters come through strongly, playing definitive roles to keep the story winding along at a good pace. The dialogue is realistic and dynamic, creating robust drama in each scene.. The story develops organically and takes the reader on an exciting ride that one always anticipates the next dramatic turn.
Very good story. Congratulations.

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Deliah

I like the title. Not many authors are able to choose captivating titles. This is a young writer who can make it if she takes the criticism well. Some corrections could turn this into a very readable story. I found many instances where I would have written it differently to elevate the tone. Some spelling errors spoiled my enjoyment of reading. Some parts are quite awkward but it has potential to be a good story.

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