Deliah Adams

Cape Town

Wish I had more time to read but still have so many books to write while working full-time on a travel mag.

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Deliah

I like the title. Not many authors are able to choose captivating titles. This is a young writer who can make it if she takes the criticism well. Some corrections could turn this into a very readable story. I found many instances where I would have written it differently to elevate the tone. Some spelling errors spoiled my enjoyment of reading. Some parts are quite awkward but it has potential to be a good story.

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