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Not Expected

This is a fantastic story with a turn I wasn't expecting it to take! It got dark, and brutish, it got tortured, and so child abusive. Seeing Professor Snape feel for Harry was very new, and I like seeing this side of him expressed as such. Well written, and a good concept. Well written, and I enjoyed the smooth flow of POV, and seeing parts of characters I wasn't expecting. :)

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Sadness

This is a very good story, a tear jerker as well. I nearly cried, but I find crying difficult when emotion is barely still residing in you (not just from your work, believe me, but it contributed). this is a very well thought out story, about how George would deal with this burden thrust upon him with the weight of fifteen horcruxes. This is well written, and grammatically correct, and a satisfying eulogy for Fred. Rest in peace, Fred Weasley, my hopes with you with Dumbledore's words: "to the organized mind, death is but life's next great adventure". for your sake and ours, Fred, I hope he's right.

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