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Great start to the book. I would suggest maybe extending the chapter a bit more maybe include a brief description of more detail into how Gary found his suggestions. Other than that it’s a great start and an interesting topic.

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Hello...sir

The story overall is something that’s definitely different and interesting. Would love to know the characters and their story more. A slower pace to the story to help the reader understand and connect with the characters. Definitely a good start and will make an interesting story!

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