Dhairya

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Hi, I am just another writer...

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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is an amazing story and deserves a chance to be read. Give this story a chance because it deserves it!
Awesome work is done by the author!

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PLOT is AWESOME!

Your plot is awesome! I love the way you describe, The only thing missing is that story only has first chapter! You need to write more if you want to gain more readers. But anyway your work is awesome! I loved it! Keep writing!

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Awesome!!!!

One should absolutely give it a try, it is awesome poetry. I don't even have words to describe...

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LOVE THE STORY!

Awesome! I don't know what to say, just update plz. This is the best Bl I have ever read! I love this!

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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome! I think I am being a fangirl but I don't mind being one! Awesome is the only word spinning in my head about this story! It's great from start to end!

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Great

This is a great story, but like any other story, it needs some work. I think you can add more detailed chapters. and the sense of horror can be explained more accurately since we are talking about horror, it needs time and needs to take things slowly because that's how horror work. I think you can work on it. I would like to read more of it.

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Awesome work!

I don't know what to write. I love the start,the middle and the last means 6 chapter too. I am in love with this story! Awesome work!

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