Diana Jefford

I am a widowed mother of two who has dreams of being published. I have been writing fantasy for over 30 years with many completed works, none yet published.

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Good read.

The story is interesting and pulls the reader in. However there were some grammar errors that made it hard to get into the flow and pacing. It kept distracting me when it shouldn't have. Things like verb tense not matching the subject. I did enjoy it otherwise. Keep writing, it only gets better.

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