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A work in progress

I think this book has a great concept going. I like the female lead, and what this book is representing. However, I think that the overall flow of the book needs to be improved. Weird word choices and phrases make the story awkward and hard to understand.

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A Gem That Just Needs To Be Polished

I can see where this story is going, and am excited to see how the plot develops. There are a few things that need revision though, like fixes in tenses and the overall flow of the story. However, I can see that once those are taken care of, this book will be a magnificent read.

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Fantastic

It's rare to read books on Inkitt that actually feel like the ones you have in your hands, but Jbarron does just that. The timing, plot, and characters are well thought out and done perfectly, and it is truly a joy to read. It is a unique fantasy book, one that hooks you in to the very last page.

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Great start, and really cute

This book seems like it's going somewhere. the plot is good and I like the character's and I also love the cute vibes that it's having. The only things I would check over are the grammar and the overall path the book is going. Since your writing about a seventeen-year-old, you gotta think like one. As someone who just recently turned eighteen, it's easy for me to read stuff and think, "That's not how teenagers actually act." So you have to be careful about that. Otherwise, I like the plot and I love how cute it is!

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Sci-Fi? Count me in.

Sci-Fi is a genre I hold dear to my heart, and feel like this book does not disappoint. A well developed, interesting plot that seems to dare the reader to continue on, along with awesome description, appealing characters, and well-written story, it's everything I look for before starting a new read. I love it!

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Queen of mystery

I have to admit, I'm not into mystery books, sort of grew out of it after the Nancy Drew phase, but this book is so much more than mystery. It's fantasy, and the author does a great job of world-building and establishing characters. The prologue is awesome, found myself really worried about the MC and wanting to know if she was okay in later chapters. There's adventure from the get-go, a journey to get back to the MC's hometown while also trying to understand how she left in the first place? Lastly, I'm sensing something like the home the MC wants to get back to, is actually evil and dystopian? If so, this is my cup of tea and I definitely can't wait for further updates!

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Whoa!

It's amazing, very unique and pulled me in instantly. Really can't wait to read more!

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