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Not for everyone

The book was enjoyable until the last few chapters. I understand the author can end the book how they want. However, if you like a happy ending, don’t read the book. It was extremely disappointing. I’m the type of person who likes at least a somewhat happy ending, but to me, there’s nothing remotely happy about this. Which seems ironic since the title hints at something happier.
So, it was good, just not my cup of tea.

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Needs Depth and proof reading

It was an interesting story. However, it reads more like an outline than a complete book. There needs to be more character development, depth and explanation. The idea is there, but it needs refinement and spelling and punctuation editing.

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Good book

I enjoyed the book very much. However, the ending left many things unresolved. Dirk and Max, Tamara and Michael, Tamara and Dirk, Duncan supposedly making trouble for Dirk, Clay still free, Tamara’s friend telling Clay where she was, etc.
There are just too many things that were hinted at and some that weren’t that were never fully resolved. The book needs to be longer or there needs to be a second one.

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Beware the Cowboy

Rally good story. I hate the cliffhanger ending though. It needs to be continued or a sequel written.

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Would make a great Movie

This book was really well written. It would make a fantastic film. I enjoy acting and would love to play
Ana. It was really fun reading the book and picturing myself as her. It was easy to do due to the writing. Very good.

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Great Read

I thought the book was a great romance. I really enjoyed the characters and their stories. The 2 things I think could be worked on is I felt the ending was very rushed and abrupt, and it is mentioned earlier in the book that there were 2 men who had wronged Dove, but only one was mentioned. So a slight inconsistency and rushed feeling, but I still really liked it.

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Dramatic Romance

Such a good, intense book. I want the next book right now so I can find out what happens. Well done keeping the reader interested; you certainly hooked me. Bravo.

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Very cute

This is one of the best books I’ve read on Inkitt. I love the story and I can’t wait to see what comes next for Luke and Emma.

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