doyoulov

pancakes and sugar. fire and blankets and books

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Don't call me biased

AHHHHH!
me likey lots, and no I am not being biased.
I don't really know how to write a good review, and I suck at grammar so I can't really tell if your's is bad or good XD
Your plot was salty, Which is better than sweet. The images are very strong and colorful. I only have one question: why was Sunny stressed?
Write more!!!
love you more. =P

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Keep calm and carry on

Your story was really funny. I loved the characters and the fact that it was centered around books (cuz books are my life) I kind of wished that the boy and the girl did not make up and be friends so fast...,I was enjoying the conflict. In all, I thought is was great, Congrats on a well-written book!

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