Graham Thompson

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Good read

You have a very good knack of keeping your readers engrossed in what you are saying, it certainly kept me engrossed! Well done, I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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Thoughtfull

To write and hold the attention of others takes a gift, a gift you seem to have. Keep writing my friend, you have a gift.

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Promising

You have the premise here for a good story, try to pull your readers in with a introduction, and a taste of what is to come.

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Thought provoking

Your story hits a nerve, even though it spans continents. And you are right, once violence is used in any relationship, trust for that person can no longer exist. I look forward to your next chapter. Keep writing.

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