Joshua (J. E.) Dyer

West Virginia

Reader, writer, and author. Teller of tales in many forms and genres.

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Good concept

The author has created an interesting story concept. The writing style has its strong qualities, but stumbles in its weak control of the English language. Homonym/ homophone confusion ( feats for feet, for example). Partial clauses and awkward sentence structures. With a rewrite, this could be a great story.

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Great start

The writing style and characters pull you in right away. This is a strong beginning to a fun read. Thank you for sharing your work.

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