CEO of the dumb bitch community

Hey would really appreciate some feedback on my psychological thriller 'Look Into My Eyes'
See link below :)
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/802025
I entered it in the 'Turn off The Lights' Thriller Contest.
In the event you're not a fan of dark/violent material, have a look at my epic fantasy novel 'Silent Storm'
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/834998
So Read, Like, Share!
Feel free to let me know if you have any books you would like me to read as well