Edna Valentine

I love reading stories..But also love writing them. Music is my therapy hence a upcoming music producer.

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Off to a great start

The plot of the story is good and different but I would love to learn more of the characters.... It was too short to understand who Lorenzo is and how he got the 6 sins. There was overuse of adverbs and wrong tenses in some sentences but overall, I would like to see the next part of this series.

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We need more SHYIRA AND MICHAEL!!!

From the plot to the writing styles to the chemistry of the two MCs... I am seriously in love with this story..... I felt like I was an additional character with them in the action!!!!...... For me everything was on spot... The plot, grammar, the WRITING ITSELF🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤

Really waiting for the next chapter.
PS: I ship Shyira and Michael

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Great work!! Impressed Reader

I am in love with this story. I could feel myself present in the story. The plot is so defined and so different to other stories I have read before. The style of words used is great. I would recommend anyone to read this story. I am looking forward to see how Will, Tristan and Chantel will become in the future.

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