Eghosa Efemwenor Gold

Nigeria

Creativity is often expressed by me through my writing. I'm an author, I write mainly romance, drama, thrillers, and YA novels. I'm still grasping knowledge for more genres.

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Magnificent and Unique idea!!!

First of all, I want to say I love the author's writing style, it's simple to follow, and is perfect at pulling readers to the story. The choice of words (diction) is interesting and amazing as it conveys every situation and emotion perfectly. I also love the nice pacing and flow. Each chapter leaves me wanting more and I have become eager to read to the end. The Twins (Moonlight and Starlight) seem like interesting characters. Moonlight is nice and considerate despite Starlight's wickedness. I can tell there's more to Starlight than we see; I know I will find out as I read on. I find the white ball of light and the mystery of the Holders interesting. Starlight thinks she is winning but she just helped her sister discover her powers.

There are few grammatical errors like: Mixed verb tense (using past and present tense in telling this story which shouldn't be)

But these errors are too subtle to obstruct the flow of the story. Great job, author!

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I admire the intelligent characters

The main character, Luz is a relatable character. I like how relatable she is. I like her personality. I admire the intelligence of these two women—Luz and Nalini. Their knowledge of plants amazes me, it draws me to the story. Cool storyline. In addition: I wanted to say that there are some grammatical errors that I am sure if fixed will greatly improve the flow of the story.

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AMAZING!!!

This story is so unique and intriguing!!! Judith is a sucidial woman, lacking self love. I'm certain after getting to know this guy a bit more, she's going to change and learn to love herself. I adore the guy's character, he's so selfless and has a great sense of humor. I just know she needs him.

I love how descriptive the author is with words, her writing style is just so amazing and special. Just after reading the first chapter, I'm hooked, can't wait to read more. Great job author!!!

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So cute and intriguing!!!

This story is amazing!!! I just love it!!! Jenna is an innocent, cute and funny high school girl; her character is interesting. While Andy is a cool guy, who's trying to keep his social life intact, he's going through a lot but I know he'll get through it. I love how the perspectives of both characters are from totally different POV. This high school story is different from the rest, it's focusing on the pure and unique side. It's really giving me the high school vibes. While reading each chapter, I'm so engrossed that I don't realize how the chapter just comes to an end, and I feel like reading more. The author is truly blessed with the gift of storytelling. I love her writing style, it's amazing.

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Nice

While reading it, it feels so real like I'm with the characters, it's so well-detailed that I can clearly imagine every event. The story's giving me the 90's vibes while being set in 1995, it's awesome. The author's writing style is unique!!

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Good Relatable Poems

This book of poems is engaging. Even though I haven't read much, I plan on doing so. Each poem reveals relatable experiences that I am sure most people face, me too. I know there are people going through a lot out there that would need to read this. Good poems. I'm glad I am reading it!

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I LOVE BLIGHTED ECHOES

This is an amazing post-apocalyptic story about a lady named Cecily who feels devastated about the earth rotting, leaving her hopeless. I'm not into post-apocalyptic stories but I must say that this is very interesting. The plot is perfect and the writing style is simple to understand and follow. I have definitely become your loyal reader and will read to the very end.
I'm sure this talented author doesn't get much credit for her writing. Author, I just want to say don't give up, never stop writing, YOU ARE VERY TALENTED and with much determination, your book might become the next big thing!!!

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Amazing scenery and descriptions

FROZEN is a great story! Just by reading a chapter, I can tell it'll go a long way.
What I admire is how the author didn't focus more on character description like majority (which isn't bad), instead the author focuses on creating an intriguing scene; using the scenes to convey certain informations about how they look (the kind of creatures they are).
Already, I like the character Cless; his determination is something I admire.
The plot is amazing, would love to see how it goes for Cless and his friends!!!

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A Cool Story

The author is so descriptive with words, it's really nice. I admire how the author described the first scene in the first chapter about Mikhail using his powers. Have to admit, Samara is a smart character, her manner of speaking is amazing. This fantasy novel is cool.
I'm very aware that the story is well-written, but I found it a bit difficult to understand few sentences because of the complex wordings, I'm sure certain readers won't be able to understand few sentences with complex words without having a dictionary by their side. And this will probably obstruct the flow of the story.

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An interesting story!!

Really interesting!!!

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