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Interesting book!

The book was interesting over all. I would recommend this to anyone who's interested in Thriller and Mystery novels. Anyways, I liked the characteristics you gave the characters as supernatural beings, it's unique (in my opinion), and isn't as commonly used like the popular ones. There were a couple of obvious and not so obvious references that amused me enough to make me keep on reading the book; and if you don't know what I mean you probably didn't mean to put the not so obvious reference there. I guess it was to be expected that his life ends there because there was foreshadowing of what would happen to him in the end. Very Ironic too, if I may add. If your book is (or already is) officially edited and published somewhere out there, I would love to have a hard copy of this book.

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Emotional!!!!!

I am very speechless. I want to cry. This story is just.....emotional!
It's a good short story (one-shot whatever you want to call it), very well written, got my attention since the very beginning -the title caught my attention- , and as a reader I want this story to be in my endless collection of books to read (repeatedly). Oh, and nice twist at the end! that part shook me to the core.

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