Elithra

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Very interesting!

Honestly I'm enjoying where this is going so far and really looking forward to how it turns out!!

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Hot

I totally want one omg!!

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Fantastic. Absolutely Fantastic!

This I one of the best plots I've read. It is very well written an keeps you sucked fully into the story. When I got to where I was waiting on the next chapter my first words were." noooooo!!!"

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Very good!

I stayed up way to late reading as I got hooked instantly with this book I'll soon be reading all your other books as well and I can't wait.

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Fantastic!

Love the story! I can't wait to finish it, you've actually had me in tears. I'll be reading everything else you've written when this is done

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Awesome so far.

I can't wait for the next update you have me hooked already!!

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Awesome

It hooked me right off the bat, made me feel for the characters and I couldn't wait to know what happened next! Great job

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Hot!

Loving it and totally want more!

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So sweet

I loved it. It was a little rushed towards the end but very well done.

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So yummy

I need more!!

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Cute!

Very cute yet witty little story. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

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Epic!

It is totally delightful! And I’m hooked

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Fun read.

I love it so far

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Awesome,,

Totallly love it so far!!

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Nice

So far I like it. Needs a little more detail, slow the pace a tiny bit

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Loving it!

So far I’m totally addicted!

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