Ell Mack

Glasgow, Scotland

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It's short, it's blunt and it's a bit crude. 3 things that many horror stories lack. I find it particularly difficult to write stories as short as this. My problem is I don't think it gives me enough time to get the point across. You managed to get your point across very quickly. It's also nice to see a modern horror story, involving technologies from this century, as opposed to haunted houses (like my story), ancient artefacts and people long dead.
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