This is a wonderful story! I love that it's based in a familiar fictional world, without it being a re-write of something else. You took the characters and made them your own.
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Rose's insecurities feel realistic, especially considering she's the daughter of Ron and Hermione. Scorpius is like most asshole-turned-love interest guys, but in these kinds of stories, that doesn't matter. Nobody reads (or watches) romance because it's new and exciting. We all watch/read it because we know the people we're rooting for will eventually end up together. That's the point, that no matter how you feel about your own life, you always can hide in the fact that at least 'they' wil make it work.
I was sorry it ended after only 20 chapters.