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amazinggg <3

dear writer,
this is by far the BEST twilight "parody" in like ever !! i love eveything about it but it bothers me a bit that you take so many words from the actual book, i understand that it relates to the book but i believe that this story should be a bit more unexpected because of bells unique emo/gothic/hipster character (sorry i dont know how to call her peronality ! ) besids from that i wont bother you with anything else because i think you should write how you think goes best with bells and im sure all of your readers will love and respect your choices for the book !! i will keep reading this like its a new episode of friends! i hope writing this makes you happy! <3 keep it up!! :D

-love, Ellie :)
p.s i love how everyone practically ignores bells death threats it makes me laugh every time :D

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NEED MOREEEEEEE D:

this is the best thing ive read ever, NO JOKE. i cried at the end. reason: THE ENDING WTF there r so many questions to ask about the ending . i.e. do Edward and Bella get divorced? what happens to the baby? what happens about James? why did James have alices phone? what happens to bitch troll Robinson ;D ???? why did James call Bella?? does Bella have another child in the future ? does Edward cheat on her? does he kill himself? does he just leave????!?!?!?!?!?!?!????? my imagination is a really dark place which is why i cried cuz i have the darkest thoughts about want would happen after knowing that the story's "finished"'i want to know the "ending" but you finished it and when i finished reading the last sentence it just hit me like BAM knowing theres no more . its an amazing story otherwise, except the ending. i just hate it for obvious reasons. thank you for a whole month and a bits worth of reading x

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