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He is My Angel

Moving, almost Zen (Haiku) like. One must read between the lines, and the words. Outstanding

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Dirty Faces

Clear concise writing style pulls one into the 'Deep South' which the author is obviously familiar with (With the exception of Oatmeal ... in the South it would be grits), Oatmeal being more a Midwestern breakfast barf. Anyway, the writing draws one slowly into the tale, and after reading two chapters, I intend to see where it goes. Haven't really discovered the plot yet, but it is starting to snake its way through. Good job.

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No Suicide

Cute topic, but your writing style is disjointed. Think of a paragraph as a small story which makes a point, and then backs it up before moving on to something else. I think you have the makings of a beautiful story here, but you need to polish it a bit. Most books have to be rewritten several times, and I think you are maybe on the 2nd rewrite on this. When describing your dog, you reiterate that 'He's so cute' ... try describing him and bringing his 'cuteness' out as a mind picture, rather than just saying 'he's so cute'. Hope this is helpful.

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