Mytho Beast :0

Greek mythology whore and avid fanfiction writer. That just about sums up everything I write.

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WOAHHHHH!!!!!

Your grammar and punctuation- AMAZING. It is practically flawless! I love the plotline and I am engrossed in this book. I really like the character developmen -especially Ayala! I love everything about his book, it is so well written and beautiful and I love the realis in it too. Ayala is direct and straightforward on asking John out and the realism and chemistry and the interests they share- I actually love this book, KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Great work!

I love the way your book was written, love the character development and I love your writing style! I am also trying to write a fanfiction on Mazerunner, but it's more difficult than you'd exppect, however you make it seem so effortless. Really good work here!

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Flawlessss

Absolutely amazing character development!!!!!! I have to say I was expecting a cliche read however the book is refreshingly realistic and has really cool twists in it that make it enjoyable to read. I loved reading this and I would definitely recommend, it really is a wonderful book.
Keep up witht he good work, author!!!!!You're doing a great job, and I can't wait for the next update.

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AMAZINGGGGG!!!!

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL OMG! YOUR WRITING IS SO MOVING AND I THINK I'VE ACCIDENTALLY FALLEN IN LOVE WITH JUDAH!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND THE REALISM AND THE PLOT AND JUST ABOUT EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING WORK! REALLY, KEEP IT UP, THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL READ!!!!

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Keep it up!!

Excellent writing technique, very nice to read!!!!Awesome plot twists happening, I love the character development.
Just a few minor grammar mistakes but nothing major!!!!!!

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Coolllll

OMG M Y SHIP HAS SAILEDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Keep it up!!!!!!!

The plot is really captivating and the vocabulary is INSANE!!!!!! I really like the character development, which to me is a really important factor in any story. Therefore I must say this book is intriguing and definitely hooks the reader!!!!
When writing sentences, perhaps vary the length- short, long and make sure that the sentences flow correctly, because sometimes it can be quite wordy.
However, I must say this is a minor issue and doesn't really take anything away from the story itself!
Execellent work! keep it up!

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AMAZING WORK

This is so beautiful!!!!!I absolutely love the character development and the imaginative vocabulary. I love the plot, I love the switches back and forth in point of views and I love observing the subtle changes in every charcter's moods and emotions. I truly love reading this book and I cannot wait for the next update!!Excellent work! Keep it up!

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