Emilia Osbeck

I am from Sweden, and yes. Yes I like Ikea.

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Very poetic

I really enjoy this story even though it is a bit out of my comfort zone.

Title - It is very interesting and it's intriguing.

Cover - I do think that summarises the story.

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The story overall is something that plays on humans need of knowing how the world works. And this idea of how the world started is very interesting. I am curious to see how the story will continue.
I do really like your writing style, it is very poetic and something I know I wouldn't be able to pull off. And the writing style works really well with this type of story. My favourite part of this story is the times when you get to read the 'Chronicles of the universe'. Even though there are some grammatical issues I do think that this is a great story.
Sometimes it seems as if though the writing perspective changes in the middle of a chapter which makes it a bit harder to read. And the chapters are a little too long for my taste, but it's not a major issue.

I'm sorry that you had to wait so long for my review.

Keep up the good work,
Have a nice day
/Emilia :)

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GREAT story

*Internally screaming and gasping for air*

Title - it raises questions and it's catchy.

Blurb - I think that it's amazing. You get a sense of the story as well as it raises interest.

Chapters and overall - I love your writing style. And I think that the chapters are well constructed and makes you wanna read more. sometimes the sentences are hard to understand but it is nothing a reread can't solve.
I was really drawn towards this story because it seemed like the badass feminine story that I am missing. Often femininity is seen as something bad or something that makes you weak, and I really hope that this is the story to change that. I would like some more detailed descriptions but I think that you have thought of that and that they are coming in the following chapters.

Keep up the good work and publish soon, I'll be anxiously awaiting next update. Take care and best wishes!
/Emilia :)

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Great potential

I'm enjoying this book so far.

Title - I like it, but it's not that intriguing. But it gives you some ideas of what the book is going to be about.

Blurb - It is great, even if the beginning seems more like a tease than a blurb.

Chapters - The main problem I have with this book is the grammar and writing. Sometimes you are missing words, letters or symbols. And other times you have misspelt words or composed sentences that are hard to understand. And all these things are easy to fix, you could just download a writing/grammar program. I am using Grammarly and it is working great. Also, I miss a lot of descriptions. This story would be great if you had more descriptions of both surroundings and people because now you have to imagine what the characters look like.
Other things that I think are pulling the story down are that sometimes characters get a personality change or that something happens without a reason and it just feels like it came out of nowhere.

These are my personal opinions and don't take them to heart, meaning don't be upset by them because they are just meant as improvement suggestion.

Keep it up, take care and best wishes!
/Emilia :)

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