I'm enjoying this book so far.
Read the story now
Title - I like it, but it's not that intriguing. But it gives you some ideas of what the book is going to be about.
Blurb - It is great, even if the beginning seems more like a tease than a blurb.
Chapters - The main problem I have with this book is the grammar and writing. Sometimes you are missing words, letters or symbols. And other times you have misspelt words or composed sentences that are hard to understand. And all these things are easy to fix, you could just download a writing/grammar program. I am using Grammarly and it is working great. Also, I miss a lot of descriptions. This story would be great if you had more descriptions of both surroundings and people because now you have to imagine what the characters look like.
Other things that I think are pulling the story down are that sometimes characters get a personality change or that something happens without a reason and it just feels like it came out of nowhere.
These are my personal opinions and don't take them to heart, meaning don't be upset by them because they are just meant as improvement suggestion.
Keep it up, take care and best wishes!